Please update, I love it. Who will you pair with Rin

please update, it's interesting

Ok, so there are several things that I would like to address.

1) Your spelling. There are many words that you use that sound like the word you want them to be but they’re not. Example, you used ‘Poled,’ as in a pole in the ground, as opposed to ‘Pulled,’ which is to bring something closer to you.

2) Grammar. The biggest thing with this one is that you place commas in weird spots. Like the sentence would’ve been fine without one or it was in the incorrect spot.

3) Rin herself. I know that she’s supposed to have a different upbringing but too feels too OoC to be like Rin.

Some events in the story. This is more just a nitpick. Why is Fujimoto teaching at a school? Or more specifically, why is the Paladin teaching at a school. It makes more sense for Yukio to be teaching rather Fujimoto who should be doing more important things.

Astaroth also had a feeling that Rin was his younger brother in cannon and was one of the reasons why he attacked him

Iblis, Lucifer, & Egyn always seem like the overprotective brothers in fem!Rin stories, but I like it and it suits them

I missed this.

So good I want more

this story interested me but female Rin is a big no in my book! Yuk
i hate the genderbender too i'm out sorry.

aw man! this got real intense! I wonder Amaimon gonna do

*gets caught giving Amaimon candy* . . . . . wut?

I'm on the edge of my seat. \(\\w\\)\

I love it!

I'll be waiting.

There are some grammar mistakes.

heyyy...
this is cool storyy
awesome

Love the pace.

Reader says: The story is definitely good.

Critic says: But it needs to be more slow-paced for everything to be truely absorbed with more interest

Together: It can become great with time so keep at it.

...that is a cruel place to put a cliffhanger. I do believe that Rin is about to meet her eldest brother and I am looking forward to it. Please updaye soon

Cool story