this is very well written fic of watching memories (or the show)
it's dificult to find these kind of fics with good characterization and comentary from the audience and yours has it!
I love how you manage not to forget anyone and the banter and convertations they have feels natural. I hope you haven't abandoned this and you'll update sometime 3

I think I’m a little confused... especially when you mentioned that Garp turned a way from Law to ask Luffy a question. Are they watching this or are they actually part of the memory?

Dammit, of course it’s been over a year and a half. Hopefully this’ll be continued at some point.

This is very good fan fiction! It's a pity it hasn't been updated for a long time.

want more please.

Your writing is awesome and I love your story. Even though you didn't mention important scenes such as the fight with the Tiger, I hope you continue it someday.

please write some more. it's good.

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Hope you still writing this story
This is so good!

I thought that Since a child was really short the tiger would be pretty big, but then I imagined an one piece adult sized person and the going merry would not be bigger then that tiger, I’d say that it was almost as big as the thousand sunny.

please write some more. it's good.

Hope you continue plz

This great

Please update! This story is awesome~
I love memories-watching fics..

Reading immunity, I now realize the lilies relate to the movie.