Fck y, g t hll. Continue dmn t.

hope to read more.

Um Daemon Aegon you don't have two names like that and Rhaegar would allow his heir to named after the most infamous bastard in Westeros

Great start can t wait to see were u take this

What happens to Ashara please let her be with Ned, he lost his father Brandon and Lyanna to Targaryens and Benjen to the Black while he married Catelyn to save Lyanna or he thought his only crime was he didn't take his sister's feeling in account and of Robert's nature that he would have stayed from his marriage bed... And Rickard is the major person to be blamed for not caring about betrothing his only daughter to a man like him Lyanna is also to blame for being reckless but she suffered for it Ned has suffered much so please let it be that Stannis marries Catelyn or another Lord instead of Ned and he can be with Ashara...

The premise was good but it felt like you were trying to force everything together the fight scenes everything was jumbled together it felt rushed

Nicely done