I was really stunned by the sudden change of perspective and it's really a very confusing part to read.
So far everything was nice and good to read but that part bugged me a lot.

Me gustó mucho, pero aveces me confundía con cual era el punto de vista, si el de kaito o el de shinishi

The romance really was Shoujo manga material but it's so cuuute! A protective Shinichi sounds perfect since Kaito seems to have an occasional death wish with all the crazy ideas and stunts he pulls. Might want to italicize differing perspectives to make it clearer but it's nice when we see both perspectives and we know they're hopelessly crushing on each other haha. Thanks for this fic!

This entire story was absolutely perfect. Thank you.

Perfect. Thank you.

I love this story! You are amazing

Why has no one told you already just how beautiful and amazing and trapping and attracting this story is?! I may be leaving my review on the sixth chapter, but I can tell you I had the best time of my life while reading this. There are feelings, feelings that are so easy to touch here. I'm a huge fan of cheeky things, and the way you described Kaito's eyes each and every time just gives away enough to practically picture it in my mind. And Shinichi sounds so desesperated. I've always pictured him as someone terribly afraid of losing his beloved ones, you know? Because he's so close to death, he witnesses it so much, that the thought of them being someone he deeply cares for just terrifies him. So his need of not letting go of Kaito, of being afraid of never seeing him again, makes so sense.

I hope you know how amazing your work is, because I'll never get tired of your writing and your stories, and I'm really looking forward to reading something yours anytime soon 3