The size of the will consume the whole solar system

Japan doesn't exist in opm World... But ok

grammar and spelling errors galore, I would say at least three per sentence. never start a sentence with and or but. it sounds stupid, is stupid and makes you look stupid. information from/about Unordinary and One Punch Man is wrong at several points. some characters are out of character for the entire story, it attempts to cover up a major plot hole with pseudo science and b*ll. power scaling between verses is absolute garbage. overall it seems ok at first glance but if someone with even a shred of intelligence stops and thinks about it even briefly its pretty terrible.

first time i read this i knew nothing of unordinary and had only a little knowledge of one punch man. at that time i loved it and the end gave me goosebumps (im a bit of a battle nut). after watching the one punch man anime, reading the manga, reading the webcomic, reading unordianry, i was reminded of this and came back to reread it. i must say its really...not great. but its not entirely the authors fault its more due to a lack of information. when this was written there wasnt all that much info on either verse so my only real criticisms are that characters were slightly out of character sometimes and that black holes being wormholes is bull. advice id give is that next time you should make sure you have as much info on any and all topics involved as possible. other than that its not bad, good job for the most part.

yeses. UnOridinary is sooo good, I. really need to start reading it again. I feel sad for ppl who haven't read it.

You're a very, very good writer :D

I would REALLY love to see a... idk, part two or an epilogue or something.

have a nice day

Z: As a fellow writer with thousands upon thousands of reads(Please note that I'm not trying to brag about myself here).
I could say you did a wondrous job at writing this masterpiece! I also, do hope that the story Uru-chan will one day be a animated series. an Anime even!. I mean it's already on Webtone so the odds of it happening are high! And I'm sure many are more than willing to participate in making it come true!

Sincerely, Me.

Dammit, this was hillarious as fuck!
Why the hell I just found out about it now?!
Why the hell there are only 30 or so reviews for this masterpiece?!

Holy shit this author just know how to make a story man.

fucking brilliant, this is a awesome piece of work and I loved every second of it.

love you mysterious author person for bringing in the best combination of a series for a long time.

I would be curious how my hero academia and UnOrdinary would work together.

dis real good

Love

Ahhh wtf that was so good

This was absolutely brilliant. I loved what you have written. An epilogue to showcase everyones reactions and the aftermath of the day would be great. Hope to see more from you.

Great story

Make an aftermath story plz!