great story

This was a good opportunity for you to demonstrate that Jaime has changed. Instead of everyone apologizing for him, giving him a chance to face someone he wronged and try to apologize himself makes it more real.

Nice parallel between the Mountain being Tywin’s enforcer and Bronn being Tyrion’s. I hadn’t thought to make that connection.

I’m glad you wrote this chapter. I was concerned that Euron was going to show up at some inconvenient moment. That being said, he didn’t lose his head so...

You wrote Brienne’s wariness well.

I’m hoping that Arya didn’t do anything cruel with that pie. Tomard is well meaning and ignorant, not malicious.

Very well done.

Another fun chapter.

I liked this chapter. Bronn was civil and Alyssane was presented as intelligent and realistic.

:-)

This was an amusing chapter, good work.

Enjoyed this one! Liked how Genna's been telling Tywin about everything that went wrong for them, and how Tywin has no choice but to listen to it all (wish we could've seen his reaction to the revelation about Ned's deception). Found all the reactions to Brienne's appearance amusing, especially Jaime's and Tyrion's. Glad Genna's getting a little warmer towards Brienne, though hoping that she gets over the rest of her prejudice towards her.

Absolutely loved this! Love your main story as well but these little tidbits always make me smile! Keep up the amazing work!

Great chapter! I hope you do a chapter from Tywin's POV when he finds out about how his wife really died. Or even just what he's thinking trapped in his room. I'm also really hoping you do an Oberyn POV. I am curious how he feels learning about Jon and what Dorne's roll will be in all of this. Please update again soon! :D

Damn, Brienne cleans up nicely doesn't she? Enough for a traditionalist southerner like Genna to (slightly) approve.