| Reviews for Luan Goes Too Far |
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  Me chapter 13 . 8/30 I get the feeling that you have lost interest in this story, and are now trying to wrap it up as quickly as possible. The long time it takes you to update, & the fact that this chapter skips over 2 weeks and goes straight to the machine being nearly complete (instead of, say, showing more the Louds coping with Lincolns new condition). |
 DreadedCandiru2 chapter 13 . 8/29 So...he's about to be restored to himself perhaps. This means that Luan is on he way to a life of bonded servitude to a boy who resents her. |
| GennaiArakida-XIV chapter 13 . 8/29 Well, that is good news. But I have a bad feeling about the next chapter... |
| DarthWill3 chapter 13 . 8/29 Two weeks? Wow, time flies by fast in this chapter! To be honest, I thought we'd have a few scenes involving more of the Loud sisters' crushes and paramours. Especially Benny. But I guess that can wait until the next chapter. You can only fit so much. |
| Tristen chapter 13 . 8/29 If the machine is nearly complete so that means were getting close to the end of the story. Are you excited for Season 5? |
| RCurrent chapter 13 . 8/29 Good chapter, it was interesing. |
| WinnytheUnicow chapter 1 . 8/29 What happened to your YT channel? |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/29 Plan to update anytime soon? |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/3 So what happens in ch 13 and 14. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/2 I want to see Lincoln loud look like in fanart |
| Tristen chapter 12 . 7/22 Happy 2nd Anniversary! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/17 Dude cant wait for the next chapter hurry up and update already |
| One Earth chapter 12 . 6/11 I really like this. I like stories in which one sister hurts Lincoln, and tgen does make it better again. I read it two times, and hope really that you will continue it soon. |
| jacobnerby708 chapter 1 . 5/30 Hey skyrunner what are your plans since you deleted your channel? |
| Mr monkey 78 chapter 1 . 5/30 Hey skyrunner do you still plan on doing YouTube? |
