Reviews for From the Ashes
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 10/26/2019
Glad to be so much help! :-D

You really get into Ross' character nicely, and enjoy the Brutasha interactions :-)

Nice job using the pilot's chair! Original and innovative! ;-) Wire a good touch too
PotterheadDemigod1 chapter 9 . 8/4/2019
Amazing. Can't wait for the next update. Have been checking for almost a month for another chapter. Please tell me you're going to update soon...
gabbsters chapter 10 . 7/23/2019
this is amazing. please finish
Guest chapter 10 . 5/13/2019
Omg, I needed it a lot.
I'm still in the process of getting over the way endgame made me feel, so these moments between them you write so well helps an incredible amount.
Just keep going and please make Hulk smash Ross' face. Or better, Banner smashing Ross' face too.
Thanks
srhittson chapter 10 . 5/13/2019
Loved this chapter. Can’t wait for the next one
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 5/12/2019
Nice additions for Ross and Tony's scenes, all of it coming together much cleaner.

Really do like the whole bit in the farmhouse, and yeah Hulk had just come off of a series of hard fights before Thanos. That said, Thanos' skill still gave him the edge I felt

Looking forward to what you have next! :-D
Guest chapter 10 . 5/12/2019
I've got an easy solution for Ross: bullet to the head. Or messed-with brake lines of his car. Or a bomb. A house fire. Robbery gone wrong. Slippery floor in his bathroom. Laptop falling into his bath..

It just takes a tiny bit of imagination, now the question is, do you have it?
asd1990 chapter 9 . 5/1/2019
love this fic. keep going
thesoundofasmile chapter 9 . 3/31/2019
You do such a good job of driving home the point that the Hulk is much more than just a 'mindless beast' and in fact has some humanity to him. It's not easy to balance the 'otherness' of the Big Guy with the bit of familiarity that he and Natasha have developed, but you've done it well.

I loved the "Hulk and Tasha?" line - it came through so clearly in my mind as I read it. So simple, yet says so much. I love that aspect of her conversations with him - they are remarkably simple, and yet there's so much woven into them. Really dig it.

I loved the tension you created here with his initial unwillingness to go along with her plan, and the quick view into Ross' mindset (and all of his poor decisions!).

Really liked this one, and can't wait to see more! :)
Guest chapter 9 . 3/26/2019
This is the only BruceNat story I check for updates. Really enjoy what you’ve done so far and can’t wait for more!
suteko1 chapter 9 . 3/25/2019
definitely a fun read here. keep it up.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 3/23/2019
Nice additions to the soldiers' dialogue, including fake legal justification. Also appreciate getting into Ross' head, and how he is justifying it to his soldiers (probably never read the Accords themselves, so part of the same fake legal justification)

Really like that short paragraph about Hulk being more than a mindless beast.

Excellent chapter! :-D
Katrick chapter 9 . 3/23/2019
I love the story and can't wait for it to continue please update soon
srhittson chapter 9 . 3/22/2019
Really good chapter. Please update again soon
thesoundofasmile chapter 8 . 3/2/2019
"She wishes people would stop stating his penchant for disappearing like it's a bad thing; fighting isn't always the best course of action."

I love this. Despite a near infamous reputation as a world-class spy, she seems to get something of a rep for being driven by action. It makes complete sense that she'd be able to recognize that sometimes taking things head on isn't the best option. I think you've captured that so well, while still keeping her true to the fierce nature we know.

Their conversation in the car before entering the diner is lovely. It reads easily, but it's so clear that there's a depth beneath their words that weaves a more complex rope through their relationship. You've painted such a clear picture that it's easy to immerse yourself in it. Well done on the whole as well - looking forward to more! :)
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