You do realize that Loise's Void Magic allows her to kinetically harness atomic power, right?
It also is a form of Antimagic, and has been incorrectly considered "Holy Magic", despite the fact that it is heavily implied to have been bestowed upon by Brimir through a Deal With The Devil pact.

I cannot wait for the new chapter

More please

"Tbe midfle" should be "the middle".

Aaaand, you just ruined the premise. The time skip was a horrible idea. We just got told Louise's development instead of seeing it, a bunch of dry boring scenes.

And it's so bog standard to boot. Louise goes to another world, become badass. Gee, we sure haven't seen that before...

I'm sorry, but this fics quality is gone now.

I always love reverse summon Louise or fanfic about Louise growing became a Badass character and not just Tsundere Little girl who only know how to trowing tantrum and wait for her familiar to save her.

But I think this Nami character is too OOC and it's look like her character is too forced
Anyway thanks for the update and I hope there more progress in next chapter

I cannot wait for the new chapter

hope she makes lots of friends. cant wait to see what happens, whether she ends up with the straw hats or striking out alone

Por favor continua en el capitulo 1 esta historia, ya que el prologo me dejo interesado, espero y el que caiga sea Luffy, y que por favor que Luffy no se enamore ni nada por el estilo por favor

I like to see where this story goes, I just love to read the stories of reverse summoning with Louise.

This definitely seems to have potential. Now though I'm wondering if it's only focusing on Loise or if she'll be joining the straw hats for her adventures. Having someone like Luffy around will definitely get on her nerves at first but definitely help motivate her to become stronger. I'm looking forward to the direction you take this story :)

I like this ideas, where Louise go to another world, and the world of one piece is a crazy place. Its perfect for her to get stronger and one day she goes back, possibly with her own pirate crew, and she will show them who is boss...muahahahaha...jeah...that would be neat :D

Not bad but in why the sudden shift from 3rd person to first person, it's very jarring and weird.

By the way it's very strange to have two stories with near identical names posted on the same day.