Reviews for Fate New World |
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PasiveNox chapter 8 . 3/27/2019 Very very nice |
BuddhaBuddha chapter 8 . 3/27/2019 Dispel is cute |
coronadomontes chapter 7 . 1/29/2019 buen fanfic-good fanfic |
doraemax chapter 7 . 12/20/2018 You have a horrible habit of character's internal monologue-ing in the midst of action... making us tired waiting for the actual action. For example, we have Gazef seguing into the makings of his utterly normal bow while charging at the enemy and trying to make a shot from horse-back. uurgh... so frustrating. haha. pls don't take offence. thank you for the chapters. can't wait to read more of this. |
doraemax chapter 5 . 12/20/2018 I wonder if Shirou ever introduced Ygdrassil to Medussa or any other demi-humans Heroes (baring Hercules). |
doraemax chapter 2 . 12/20/2018 Huh, Momonga missed Vulcanis's Entry? Did his NPC continue to follow the drama at Carne and thus discover their rival Guild? hohoho... |
doraemax chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 Hmm... the theory that Soul reflects Body and vice versa, wouldn't his new body changed his Aria to his Reality Marble? |
Escanor998 chapter 7 . 12/13/2018 Also the Holy Grail(world item) should be superior to the Third Magic because it can resurect people killed by Longinus (Actually Longinus erases the taget's existence, and third magic needs a soul to work so it would not be able to resurect someone killed by Longinus) |
Escanor998 chapter 7 . 12/13/2018 What is the name of Shirou's Guild weapon |
Escanor998 chapter 7 . 12/13/2018 Actually, you can buff Ainz by making that there is no more Level cap and by making him capable of using Wild Magic via his Wish spell |
Aeonir chapter 7 . 11/30/2018 Earlier he saved the village problem, now it's all "Oh nooo possible political ramifications, better go drown in a ditch" ... |
Ash the Aura Guardian chapter 7 . 11/30/2018 When I clicked on this story, I didn't expect it to be this good! While it definitely has its flaws (among them being the insane amount of what feels like padding), you're doing a really nice job at writing something that feels interesting and fresh. Can't wait to see more of this! |
Paxloria chapter 6 . 11/28/2018 This... is an odd chapter. I thought Momanga & Nazarik arrived normally, but according to this Momanga/Ainz/Momon arrived 200 years in the past and then didn't DO anything, plus it seems like Momanga has mostly abandoned Nazarik despits all the NPCs that should still be there... |
Alfonse08 chapter 7 . 11/28/2018 I have to say that your story is a lot more original in some ways compared to other Overlord fics and very well thought out. Can't wait to see what more you have in store for the future and hope you update this soon. |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/26/2018 Googlemo is troll considering his favorites are full of trashy fanfics too. Go back to beastlair. |