The formatting’s weird but it’s a great story. Continue? Update?

Da F#%k

I get that you're new to Fanfiction so can I suggest one thing? It's best separate the story into different paragraphs every couple lines. That helps people read. Have you ever tried to read a giant block of text? Your mind shuts down after a few lines. Its like trying to read word problems in math . . . You're mind just goes nope. Also I'm reading this on a like 8 year old tablet so it could be the tablet but there's something weird about the text, it's like there's code mixed in. But like I said it could be the tablet. Well from what I could read it seemed decently written, so keep going! And good luck. Also remember your gonna get some flames, but you're writing for you. So it doesn't matter what the comments say.

So far the story is good but you don't need to put in links or what ever it is but other then that it's good

You could’ve just adopted the previous story of Acnologia, and also correct your writing.