I like this story, its very cool.

Still love this and still missing your writing.

I came back to reread this fic. It's amazing. You have written some of my favorite Voltron fics. I hope you choose to continue this story. I must know what happens next!

Gone on a Voltron bing, and found this fic-its great, and one of the better fics that have Keith as Galra. the intrigue here is well done and the technical writing is good as well. it is interesting that Keith builds a rapport with acxa.

And the description of Lotor as a manipulator who is always a step ahead, is well shown.

Amazing! I saw this update and have been dying to read it. I'm loving every bit of this fic. Things are getting intense. Shiro is such a kind soul. I'm glad he still believes in him. I hope the rest of the team comes around. I'm not going to lie, the interaction between Keith and the paladins hurt my heart. I hope everything will end up working out. I can't wait for more!

Sorry to hear about your computer, that's a major bummer. Hope you like your new one!

He snuck the chip into the armor with his tail didn't he? I knew he'd secretly pass it along under the cover of a fight! I can't wait until Shiro finds it and realizes where it came from, he's going to be so relieved!

Okay, so we're getting closer to the part of the show where Lotor is building his little artificial rift... I'm still concern with how the eventual fall out between Lotor and his generals is going to turn out. Either poor Keith winds up working for Haggar along with the generals, or Lotor somehow kidnapps him to use as a barginning chip with Voltron. Either way the drama is going to be epic!

Awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next one.

I hope that Keith defends Acxa when Lotor gives her the "you failed to retrieve the teleduv piece" lecture, as well as the other generals defending Keith when the tell their leader of how he turned his back on his former allies.

Worth the wait and looking forward to the next chapter

Yey! A new update!

It's been a week?

Whoa! A brand new laptop! I know that feeling...

If a fight breaks out, the only way I can possibly see Keith passing the Paladins the data he had been able to collect, is if he pulls a page from Young Justice Aqualad's play book and uppercuts Shiro in the stomach hard enough for Shiro to grab at his midsection. That way Keith could shove the tiny data chip into Shiro's hand without anyone seeing it and retreat with the other generals none the wiser.

Either that or he lunges for Shiro (sort of big guy vs big guy move) and the two wind up separated from the group, but Lotor is crafty and would find that to be suspicious from the get go.

I'm excited for what the next chapter will bring! _

Looks like that ch25 might be of Keith's side of this event, before get to see/read their battle over the final teleduv piece. Its also good to see that Acxa is really trying to get close to Keith, I hope that they do end up trusting each other (as I am a Kacxa fan and while I do know that this fic might not end up being a Kacxa ship, some Kacxa-like moments are still to see/read).

This whole fic is amazing. The suspense is killing me and I must know more! The conflict in this is so good. It's had me on edge the whole time. Poor Keith! Poor paladins! I can imagine everyone's feelings in this because I am right there with them. You have described everyone's perspective, feelings, and inner dialogue so well. I started this fic at two in the morning and have been up since. I just wasn't able to be put it down. I had to read it all. Great work! Thank you so much for writing this and sharing your talents with us. I will eagerly be waiting for the update. I need to know what happens next! That cliff hanger was killer.

Yey! A new update!

Awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next one.