When I first read this story, I didn't think a cohesive story combing the rules of the Fate universe with RWBY's rules could be done. You sir, have proved me wrong spectacularly well! I really like this new take on Shirou, who seems to be a combination of all three of his routes to make his character even more interesting than ever. While the finishing moves seem to be mostly superfluous and unnecessary, I really like what you've done with all the characters involved, and I really can't wait to see you do Volume 3 and beyond! Cheers Bud, and here's hoping you're doing well wherever you are!

You forgot six things about Archer, thoughUBW degraded Archer's Noble Phantasms by one rank, so only Broken Phantasms of A Rank can kill Heracles, which makes UBW useless.
- Nasu explicitly stated that a battle between Saber and Archer would depend on their masters, implying that both of them are equal, and that Archer's strength is in range.
- Archer can literally scan and identify servants in one glance by scanning their swords/armor, which gives him the knowledge advantage.
- Arsenal of Noble Phantasms that can counter servants by using their legends against them. Enemy is Demonic? Use Gaè Bolg's anti-demonic properties. Enemy is Beast? Hrunting goes brrr brrr. Enemy has impenetrable magic shield? Say hi to Gae Dearg.
- Archer wasn't putting any effort to win the Fifth Holy Grail War.
- Archer is a Counter-Guardian at full strength.

Bro, I gotta thank your IMMENSELY for introducing me to that MGR FLAMES! I can't believe I was deceived for so long when it came to video game music. And here I thought that I listened to the best of the best, when out of nowhere you come out here talkin about "listen to this while reading the scene". And boom. My life is forever changed... Massive respects for that my G! And I'm 100001% sure that the next volume is finna have plenty more musical greatness incoming, and it's going to be glorious (;~;)... Oh, and I hope that there's more Shirou and Ruby interaction next time. For a story that seems to revolve around the two, they haven't really interacted or had a heart to heart moment with each other. Hell, I can see why people thought that Shirou and Blake were going to get together when they seemed to spend more time together than he has with any other member. But you know how to work a story, so I'm sure there's more to come for the Redhead's :).

Yo man, I hear more Archer slander from you and ima bout to throw hands (_)... But I can definitely tell next chapter is about to go crazy with that MGR soundtrack, let's get it!

I guess Shirou hasn't acquired the EMIYA growth spurt yet. That boi tiny af lmao.

Now hold on. That MGR OST actually went stupid(in a good way) with the fight scene! I'm now hyped to see what other songs you got linked up to future fights :). Hopefully as awesome as this one.

Shirou was straight up not having a good time lol

Yo. Shirou in Proto-Arthur Armour sounds badass af 0_0...

That moment when Crocea Mars has higher stats than Caliburn, and Shirou has been nerfed to high hell. Feelsbadman :(...

I think it would be neat if some of the cast know magecraft at least a few, maybe Ruby and Jaune.

Great. With jaune AND shirou, it’s like a dense pushover extravaganza

Wow this is really good. I like how well you've blended the two worlds together and the unique elements to it (e.g. the soul surges).
Looking forward to the next chapter (an actual chapter- no offense- this time) I do hope it comes soon.

I wasn’t aware shirou was capable of feeling such strong emotions anymore after the fire

I think he should've gone in wearing a blindfold to avoid making eye contact.

i must say the fanfiction is good and i am writing my own currently...

But there are a few things that are nagging on me.

First: The buff if the others, it makes sense that they can now stand with Shirou but in my opi ion it is a bit too big, for crying out loud Shurou can utilize the skills of legendary heroes and that urks me when i see teenagers holding up with him.

Second: And this is what really irks me...he uses Noble Phantasmns alright but why was Pyrrha able to destroy Kanshou and Bakuya in their Trace Overedge form, they are Noble Phantsmn and C Rank ones at that possible B Rank when broken and then Pyrrha destriys them with a normal weapon?! Hers isnt even a noble phantasmn which would be impossible and everyone knows that...the only Noble phantamsn on remnant is Jaunes sword and ozpins cane!

I really would like an explanation about that.

I am not mad but really sceptical you know and the Buff was to major especially as Shirou used Berserkers weapon and the paladin suvived...that is plainly not possible.