There is a kind of beauty to this. To actually go with this ending... It makes me wonder how aware the Hunter was of what would happen; whether or not he wanted this outcome, because any other might separate him from the Doll.

I really loved this story. I hope that you make more like it this couple does not get enough attention. This story is super sweet.

Holy. that's an awesome story. I wish you had turned it into an epic. however I'll admit that the story is incredibly sweet. I loved it.

(Lovely work... and possibly the closest thing possible to an actual happy ending in Bloodborne.)

such a good short story!

THE HUNTER AXE IS FOR PLEBS WHO DON'T KNOW HOW TO DODGE!

Seriously, this was adorably sweet, but you missed things.

What happened to the Moon Presence?
Did he become a Great One?
Does he ever leave the Dream again?
Does he do it with the Doll?

I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS!

I would absolutely love for this to somehow become a full story, maybe after this hunt has ended, you could send the Good Hunter and his Plain Doll, to one of the Dark Souls games, or even an anime idk, but with how you wrote this. It would be a treat to read, and I'm sure others would think so too.

;)

5600 WORDS LOOK AT YOOUUU IM SO PROUD OF YOU

i literally smiled SO BIG at the bow on the messenger why is the hunter such a dork im screaming, and it felt lik with her this is sooo cute

shes so cute im screaming shes not a plain doll shes my DAUGHTER AND I LOVE HER she deserves all the good things in life and THEY DESERVE TO BE HAPPY and nothing bad better ever happen to the you know idk what really happened in the end but? ?theyre happy? so idc i love them

i got ? so attached? to these characters i dont even know ? and this is literally so cute and feel-good and im losing it, i dont know much about bloodborne but you still absolutely entranced me with your writing. That takes so much incredible skill, my king, and I'm sososo proud of you ! 1000000000/10 for you, my love ~

gerhman can bite me, though.