Reviews for Daemon the Devil
emoryjmorrill chapter 31 . 3/7
Great
ghostitan chapter 31 . 2/4
Really good please update
Max20.7 chapter 31 . 1/25
A good chapter. I hope that your fight against the white walkers will be creative, like a fight at the wall and not just a copy of the show.
Dopeenight chapter 30 . 1/10
I dont know what to say this story is great. Daemon the Devil basically Deamon the Rogue Prince reborn. Simly awesome. However I hate the me rephrase I hate Sansas character. Second I understand letting Robb live but it kinda fucks the story over in my opinion. This isn't a flame. Just me stating my opinion.
lunacyvonklaus chapter 3 . 10/17/2019
Same storyline just different POV.
rpvirtuoso chapter 5 . 6/26/2019
Looks pretty stupid to hear modern slang in Westeros and MC is almost like batman or superhero vigilante which is probably what you're trying to do and it failed spectacularly. There is no obvious goal for MC and he just goes on with his stupid life. How he didn't try to get his own family when they're alone is beyond me. He instead goes on stupid vigilante and kills bandits.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17/2019
As for nicknames calling someone the devil in the respective universe doesn’t work seeing how no faith created that concept of a devil.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/17/2019
That whole last chapter just feels weird and random
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2019
776 AC is about 500 years in the future of actual canon, just FYI.
XenoLucifer chapter 9 . 4/21/2019
9 chapters in and you already handicap the MC? not only that but he lost to the Mountain of all people.
Jack Redhawke chapter 7 . 4/19/2019
In chapter 7 near the end you seem to be talking from daemons POV not Robb’s but he refers to Talisa and Catelyn as wife and mother, even tho it must be daemon because he is talking about going after Arya and Talisa mentions them finally meeting again, some mistakes were made here
10868letsgo chapter 24 . 12/28/2018
Love it! Can't wait to see more.
Guestman123 chapter 23 . 12/22/2018
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Sparky She-Demon chapter 22 . 12/4/2018
Nice story. Is this Aegon real or a Blackfyre imposter?
BioHazard82 chapter 22 . 12/4/2018
Another good chapter.
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