When are you gonna update? I really wanna see what comes next.

I really like this story, it's really interesting, if you ever make a sequel I have a few ideas.

Volviste pero ya arruinaron la franquicia con la secuela que sacaron los de naughty dog. Buen capitulo

I knew you’d be back! Last Of Us II is acc great not gonna lie in my opinion.

Awesome to see this come back, your doing great.

Jake is a dickhead

I certainly hope this story comes back, and stay safe during this uncertain time.

Ellies gay

Very good story. Can't wait for next uptades! Are you gonna do a sequel when TLoU part 2 will release?

You've done well, worth the wait. I also like that you actually put the effort into completing these stories and not just abandoned it half way through, keep up the great work.

Awesome can't wait for the next one

Thx for this awesome chapter can't wait for the next one :D

SMM040502 the problem I have of the story is Jack
1/ you don't have Jack say much and have us mostly read his thoughts
2/ jack is a minor character even though he's meant to be a main character, quite frankly you could get rid of jack and the story would still be the same you need to integrate Jack into the story more as he is now he is nothing more of an observer than a main character
3/ you keep changing jack's attitude towards Ellie literally in each chapter in one chapter you have him threatened to kill her and in the next one, you have him think of her as a child(which is stupid when you have them as the same age). you need to change his attitude towards Ellie more naturally not the bipolar way you did it
4/ the masked nightmare bit is pointless this does nothing for the story and having everyone know he's the masked nightmare because of his eyes is bullshit if you want to make the masked nightmare bit work you need to make it a bigger part of the story and give more information why he calls it
5/ jacks age the way you make his age 14 is bullshit you are telling us that lots of adults are scared of a 14-year-old I call bullshit on this I recommend you make his age 16 or 17 as this make your whole masked nightmare work better because adults will be more scared of a 16 or 17-year-old than a 14-year-old

this story looks good but what I found bloody pointless is you having jack not say much and only thinking a lot this just pointless so far, not much point of having him in the story

and having Joel say the comment about Jack keeping his hands to himself when Joel finds out Ellie is 14, not 12 is stupid if Jack is 14 as you say then, Joel should have said it when he thought she was 12
having Joel say it when they are the same age is a bit pointless you should only really have Joel say that if Jack is older like about 16 when it makes more senses

I do really like it that you aren't having them treat him like a kid

a wonderful chapter pls update soon :D