This is great. I love fanfictions like this, and it's wonderfully written.

This is really good please continue.

This made my week! IS Flug threatening Dr. Cassidy? I hope there will be another addition!

I really liked this. It’s creative and well written hope to see more

Wow! This is really well done, and it’s such a cool story. Your use of prose is so vivid- I hope you continue, because I’m really excited to see more of Flug and Black Hat’s relationship. I also wanna watch the shit hit the fan when BH comes to the rescue. Have a great day!

This is very good. It's suspenseful and well-written, and I like how deeply you look into Flug's psyche and about his attitude about his face and how he made his creations. I look forward to more on this story, so you've definitely earned both a follow and a favorite from me.