Well, crap, I thought when this story said complete I would actually get a complete story. Of course I missed the (on hold)... sigh

I really hope you continue this, this is so good! We've got Leon, Claire, Chris and Jill all in one story set in Raccoon city! Honestly I was speed reading to the point they all (hopefully) meet each other and now I'm left hanging because it still hasn't happened yet... Oh well. Not going to lie, Leon is my favourite character in the RE franchise (he became THE MAN in my eyes when I first saw him roundhouse kick a las plagas in RE4) and the idea of a Jill/Leon pairing would be very interesting. But Leon/Claire is classic (tore me up that they only ran into each other twice in the remake campaign). But the middle of a zombie apocalypse is also not the time for that stuff, I get it. I like that the noir costumes make an appearance though.

I like it please continue

hope the story hasn't been abandoned? I just found it yesterday and have been enjoying seeing you combine Outbreak and games 23. first time I've ever seen some one do that?

I started reading this a little while back and really loved the blending of RE 1.5, RE2, RE 3 Nemesis, and Outbreak and was really intrigued by where the story was possibly going. You probably get this a lot, but I was wondering if you had plans to continue it or if you'd moved on from it to do other stories.

Didn’t know I liked this ship as much until I read this story and I’m so excited to see what comes next and for their reunion and final battle . By the way your writing skills and imagination are top notch!

Im going to be honest and say it felt like i skipped a chapter. Im serious, read the previous chapter then this one and you'll see what i mean. More importantly, where is chris and alyssa? The group are already in the lab and are already about to escape, everyone should've been here even mark.

Okay seriously, why is leon leaving the police station when he told kevin to meet him there? It makes no sense especially when he freaking knows claire is going to the station. Speaking of kevin, the guy knows chris is alive so why is he pretending like chris is dead when he knows he's stars and he didn't see chris die and also why isn't he telling claire that he saw chris and that chris is on his way to the station? I don't understand this logic. I really liked the beginning but then i didn't like the sudden change in elza personality which got her killed, then after that i started to like the story again especially when chris came back to raccoon to save claire. I didn't know how to feel about ada's introduction because i didn't like her snobby personality, i thought it was another person entirely to be honest. I really hated the fact that leon left claire for ada despite what happened in the hotel between them which wasn't that long ago that she was having trouble coping with the situation and he decides to bail on her over some random snobby woman. I do like the things that are happening in the station right now but again leon left with some random woman (jill and yes i know she saved him life and im still giving him the side eye) out of the station, the same station he has been trying to get to this entire time and where he knows claire and the rest of the group is going to be at and yet he just got there and is already leaving towards an evacuation site without waiting for claire and the others to at least arrive at the station to let them know of a potential way out of the city. Do you see how illogical leon's actions are? It just doesn't make alot of sense to me.

One of my favorite RE2/Cleon stories so far, especially because of the gradual "I hate you I love you" dynamic Leon and Claire have and how you impressively combined their story with the Outbreak File stories. Your writing quality is top notch, specifically with directing the action and giving amusing dialogue.

See, here's the thing. When I imagine Leon in RE2, I see this young, dumb, naive guy stumbling his way through this ridiculously horrific situation and eventually facing through his fear and become his idea of a hero and survive through the station, sewers and lab to eventually survive the entire city. What I struggled with was that this story had a Fuckboy Leon stumbling his way through this ridiculously horrific situation. Seriously damn, why does every girl in this story admiring and wanting to fuck Leon? Back off thots, Claire is queen. I really slogged through the Jill ship stuff. Ada wasn't so bad, it's part of Leon's story. That Elza Blondie chick, the one night stand, was 'okay' shock value when she came in and got very annoying until she died and gave Leon really beautiful character development that carried him through the rest of the chapters and I really enjoyed that one actually so props. I definitely appreciate this vulnerable side to him, and your portrayal of his desire to be a hero. I simply just slogged through the Fuckboy parts, that's all.

I really look forward to your next update, take your time, and good luck!

Nice! Keep going, this is good. i hope the moment when Leon and Jill meet Claire :)

Nice! Great chapter!

Leon's thoughs... This is epic xD!

I really enjoyed this :)

Omg I'm so in love with this story I hope you write more soon. I was hooked since the first chapter. I love what you did with the RE2 story by combining it with RE: Outbreak, that is amazing work. The writing is beautiful. The grammar is amazing. I just love it. Can't wait to see what comes next for everyone!

Nice! I'm hoping all the ladies make it!