Reviews for Criminal
beccasullivanwrites1 chapter 1 . 6/11
I adore your shadow-tinged oneshots!
AngelDragon1976 chapter 1 . 5/23
love it love it love it.
Pharies chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
I loved that bit about Fred and George with the roses. So much fun.

~Tori
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2018
That was nice. Never heard the song, sorry but I don't listen to that. But despite that, good story. Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
This was beautifully written and I would greatly appreciate it if you expanded it into chapters on how they got to the point of saying 'I love you'...making it into a full fic.

This reminds ms so much of how my Dom and I are together. More than once he has told me that he's not a good man, that he's done things in the past that normal people couldn't imagine doing (all for the greater good), he shows a cold, closed off, intolerable side towards everyone...but to me, I am allowed to see things most people dont get to, his emotional caring and loving soft side. He's amazing and scarily similar to Severus Snape. I guess it's a good thing that my childhood character crush was Snape. Lol
hexphoenix chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
I like it :)
Sineadtwiggy chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
Ah, love it. Well written, though with a couple of hiccups, a joy to read. Thanks for sharing
ForsakenKalika chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
Um yes. *nods* My husband is also "someone I should stay away from" and we've been together 13 years. In my experience, once those guys let you in, they will do everything in their power to keep you there. Loved this oneshot (and song, love Britney), so thank you.