This is a really good story. I can’t wait for the next chapter! When are you putting it out?

Enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more of it

Like most story, it just another junk

Awesome please continues this story please and Harry look like Revan 2.0 or Vader 2.0 and also is he built his own army!?

So Harry has a double blade? Sweet!

Idr an lightsaber that “roared” when ignited

Needs some spelling/structure work but not bad

I like that Harry's isn't some bastard like most Sith or a pansy like in canon. Story is still to young to really judge but it has potential at least.

Spelling is fine but you keep using words that don't fit where verbs should be and occasionally a sentence reads like you forgot to write part of it. As you begin describing something that no correlation to the beginning of the sentence. It really breaks the flow and makes me have to stop and mentally fill in the gaps. Sorry if that is a bit confusing but I was never good at describing errors. In short, get a beta, reread your story after taking a small break or try something like grammarly.

While concept is pretty good, typos and grammatical mistakes are very obvious, and I had to force through them to complete this chapter.
A beta will be good idea.
Also this story is very one-dimensional now. There is no lightsaber fighting forms, no major force powers, no mystery.
Harry has just been given lightsaber and suddenly he can equal Darth Maul in fighting powers, who I must add defeated Master Jinn, who was a skilled user of lightsabers and force powers.
I don't intended to be so criticise you but right now story is bland, you need to spice it up and not just on Star wars side but Wizardry World side too.
still I have followed you and I hope I will add this story to my favourites list too.
May the Force be with you.
-Kshitiz

Nice

Nice!

It is Seamus.
Appart from that Draco is putting his mother at risk that is strange for him. Riddle is in his house, he is too much in the open about changing sides coming the break sure thing there will be consequences if he won’t ask for sanctuary to Dumbledore for him and his mother. also Draco never talk to Tonks in his life how is that he knew how to contact her?

I really like the story, what happen with Ashoka mission if she is still with Anakin and Obi? Why Yoda gave her a solo mission that she didn’t do? Or that was a flash forward?

excellent update

A very promising beginning. Looking forward to what you come up with. Just keep in mind that the earth magic has promising potential as well as the universes force.

If Draco tried to backstab Ron and Hermione in the back for being double agent for Umbridge then he shall face the NEW Harry Potter with his allies to crush Voldemort, the Death Eaters, Fudge and the Ministry of Magic.

God save the Queen! Long live the United Kingdom!