update plz

Excellent fic so far, I'm looking forward to reading more of it in the future. Keep up the amazing work

Gay

your chapter 14 never went up even though i got an alert

Should kept the dead she serves no purpose

No thanks I’m done

Boo don’t go with root that’s so over done and really predictable

It interests me why you dont have more reviews for how good this story is, hope you update soon

I dont like how you've revived sakura... if you had done so I would have preferred it to have come later in part two with the akatsuki perhaps

How strong is naruto? He did extremely well against kabuto who granted was holding back, is still kakashi's level...waaaaay above anko's I think he would be able to defeat her with the usage of kyuubi chakra

Good chapter! Highly emotional at the end there. Anyway, I look forward on whether Naruto will accept Danzō’s offer or not. But in any case, keep up the good work and see ya next update!

Sorry, only read this chapter now. I know there is a new chapter already, and it may seem something weird to be complaining about, but...
You keep caling Naruto "blonde". That's for females. Blond is for males, blonde for females.
...English is weird.

NaruTen! Naruten! NARUTEN! NARUTEN!

(Hundreds of others chanting in a cult like fashion)
NARUTENNARUTENNARUTENNARUTENNARUTENNARUTENNARUTENNARUTENNARUTEN

Excellent work with this chapter! I wonder how things’ll go with Naruto when he speaks to Sasuke? Hmm...

While I like you story there are somethings that you are messing with that should not ever be mess with. The rasengan and how it's taught should stay that way for what it is. The Bijudama or tail beast bomb is never formed in the hand, but in the mouth of the tail beast, hence unless the Kubi total takes over Naruto, he can not form it. And also note that you have it reversed, and that Minato copied the Bijudama into making the Rasengan and not the other way. And if it's one thing that Naruto isn't, it's arrogant that's Sasuke's personality that you are trying to writing into or onto Naruto and you should cease at this point and correct it. there is no way Orochimaru would have anything to with Sakura and please note that he is only interested in individuals with talents and he needs their talent to further his big plans and at the point of her death, she was still a talentless fangirl. Orochimaru would never be interested her at all as he wasn't interested in Naruto and he had more potential than Sakura. And I believe that both Zabuza and Haku would have ratted her out at once upon seeing her knowing that they both witness her death and there was no way that Tazuna would have named the bridge after her either. Of all of them Kakashi included it was only Naruto that put out himself for their plight. The rest only wanted to complete the mission after Naruto declared that with this kunai he will save Tazuna and help him get home.

Good chapter! Interesting...so Naruto has become arrogant in his skills hm? He’ll need to fix that if he’s gonna get any further in the Shinobi life.

As for Sakura, her feelings for her “former” teammates have died hm? And who is the one who saved her? This gets more intriguing after each chapter I read it seems...

Look out Naruto! Orochimaru has his snake-like eyes on you and your power!

Not bad
The change in Sakura mentality is worrying.
In the end Naruto should mature more and learn how to control his emotions.
Learning fuinjetsu is necessary and I feel it time for him to learn about his parents.
He is a chounin already.
I suggest to make him join a bu to temper him.