Reviews for Heroes of Tomorrow
Guest chapter 15 . 8/28
SPOILER TO ANYBODY WHO ISN'T CAUGHT UP TO THE MANGA

As a suggestion for Wade when you dive further in to the plot. When he gets the quirk Black Whip, some things you could change about the quirk is that it's even more uncontrollable and serves as this the MHA worlds symbiote. I can imagine Wade fighting in a Venom suit all while struggling to maintain his sanity
coldblue2015 chapter 15 . 8/27
Sorry for the late review...God, has it been a Month or two already?

Wade Walker:

I did like Wade vs Shoto. He does have a Healing Factor that most people do not benefit from, along with One For All and Spider-Powers. Though, Shot Todoroki is a powerhouse in his own right that could survive in "Marvel" or "DC" Comics. It was interesting to read how reckless/daring Wade got with fighting Shoto, with all the pain he felt and pushing past his limits. He was doing great with the Venom Blasts and using his fingers to show Detroit Smash at Shoto, until he got a ring out. It was great to read. Recovery Girl having to use Surgery for the bone fragments is a nice touch and makes since that Wade HEALING Factor is not at Wolverine or Deadpool levels.

Shoto Todoroki:

...I almost want SOMEONE to have write a story to put Shoto in the "DC" or "Marvel" Universes. His powers were always great and had interesting limitations. I just like how Wade wanted him to go all out, to be the best person/hero he can be. This was not about his dad. This was about Wade not accepting HALF the effort that Shoto was putting in. It rather interesting to read Shoto did forget about his dad, Endeavor, for a while. Though, nice job with the flashbacks of trauma he experienced in his childhood.

Midnight/Nemuri:

Ha! I knew that she would brought in her sexual experience with Wade father and DAMN! That was not something they wanted to hear, except Midnight. I have to admit, I did like that Midnight did not step in or be a protective of Wade...Still, she wonders were she got this much power from. It was interesting to read Midnight find someone romance/interesting in Wade father, Daniel. I really hope with the latest events in "My Hero Academia" Manga, that we have Daniel Walker being resurrected by the League of Villains technology and being Nomu...perhaps a failed Nomu experiment that went rogue?

Stain/Hero-Killer:

Man! I always get chills when this guy is mention. He could also be in "Marvel" or "DC" Universe, being a Anti-Hero or Crazy Zealot who hates Heroes that are Hypocrites. I do wonder how Stain will influence Wade in this story and give Wade Spider Powers, but I hope Stain is more dangerous than that. Something surprising.

Questions

1) Will Stain have any power-ups or being more dangerous, given Wade having Spider-Man powers?

2) Are we going to have Daniel Walker being resurrected as a ROGUE Nomu with Quirks that fit his Fighting Style, but have fragmented memories?

Suggestions

1) I hope Stain is more dangerous. Something. Maybe the League of Villains break Stain out of Prison and experiment on Stain by giving him multiple Quirks. Probably trying to turn Stain into a Nomu or into powerful tool, but that kind of backfires. It just something to consider, given Wade Walker being very overpowering in his own right.

2) I think that very possible...especially with "My Hero Academia" Manga, with Shigaraki gaining his insane power-up...I just figure Daniel Walker body would be a VESSEL for the League of Villains to create a more powerful Nomu, but they did not plan for Wade Walker or his mind sort of going ROGUE. Like Daniel mind is splintered/fragmented similar to Wolverine amnesia and trying to pick together back his past. This is just a idea from "Marvel" elements that you could use for Daniel Walker resurrections.

Keep up the good work, stay safe and stay healthy!
francisthewitcher chapter 15 . 8/24
Holy shit dude, that chapter was INSANE! I mean, I really loved how intese you wrote the fight scene, especially how Wade managed to talk out Todoroki to use his left side of the power, also it was amazing how you finished the fight. Seriously, I'm glad you decided to let Wade win this round, I can't imagine how things would be different if you let Todoroki win, also it's a good thing that you made Endevaour not care that his son lost the competition, because what really mattered to him was using the left side.

Also I can't wait to see what kind of talk Nerumi and Wade will have, I'm also intrigued what she has in mind, a secret maybe? Anyway, I like the idea that Wade and Midnight know each other.

Again, the fight scene was so epic that I played a Metal Gear Rising soundtrack, which actually made things even greater. And now that Wade has advanced to the next round, it goes without saying that he's gonna face Bakugo in the finals, which I'm so hyped about that.

I know that since he doesn't have the web shooters, he can't do anything to distract Bakugo and his explosive quirk. Something tells me it's gonna be so epic.

I really can't wait for the next update man.
francisthewitcher chapter 13 . 8/24
Normaly I would say that it's redundant you're repeating the "great power, great responsibility" quote in your story, but since I'm in a Spiderman mood, I can see why this quote has a really strong message than the characters of My Hero Academia needs to listen, just like Wade is doing right now to inspire his friends.

Also I'm surprised Midnight was Daniel's girlfriend, which makes me wonder what kind of relationship would be with Daniel's son.

Also you did pretty well with Shinso vs Wade fight scene, I knew Shinso would try to make him talk by mentioning his father, and boy he made a big mistake. But also I like the part when Wade inspires him, giving him a lecture about great power and great responsibility.
francisthewitcher chapter 10 . 8/24
You know, when you made a Stan Lee cameo in your story, he would be so proud of you :')
X chapter 2 . 8/23
To be honest I think it’s cool that you had him replace Izuku and gave him a harem as well. I also love the fact that he doesn’t tolerate Bakugou’s bullshit.
francisthewitcher chapter 12 . 8/23
Well, I must say this is getting even more exciting with the Sports Festival Arc. I'm pretty sure this will have so many surprises.
francisthewitcher chapter 9 . 8/23
Dude, that chapter was just amazing! The Nomu vs Spiderman fight was just insane! I have no more words to describe how much I loved this part. And what makes me glad to see is that Wade is not the only one who steps into the fight, I'm talking about Kirishima, Todoroki, Bakugo. Of course, even though they didn't fight Nomu along Wade, it's good to see they're not just standing as side characters.

I really hope you can give the rest of the Class A some spotlight as they deserve, but I'm sure you're gonna do it.

Anyway, I can totally see your story has so much potential, I'll keep reading and I hope more surprises will come forward!
francisthewitcher chapter 5 . 8/23
Wow dude, that was amazing. Normally I would think it was just a one sided fight since Wade had two quirks, but I can think of a better reason why Bakugo couldn't beat him. It's not about comparing the abilities, it was his explosive temper, he always uses his anger as his power which somehow powers up his Quirk, and yeah he can also be smart like changing directions of his attack to catch Wade by surprise, but at this point he was very pissed that he couldn't think straight, which he was in a great disadvantage.

But here's what I think, I believe Bakugo will start learning from Wade's quirk and who knows, maybe he's gonna learn all of his tricks so he will turn his weakness into strength.

Anyways, that was a pretty good chapter. I'm starting to like this story even more.
francisthewitcher chapter 4 . 8/23
To be honest I was starting to think Wade was turning into a Gary Stu, until I read your author's note. You brought some good points, and it's understandable you can't just ignore Spider Man's traits, otherwise it wouldn't feel like he's THE Spider Man, you know what I mean?

I didn't expect he had to do the tests by using all his powers, which it was pretty cool, but wow it's hilarious to see Bakugo getting pissed to see the "quirkless" dominating the tests.

Also you're right that if he would be a Gary Stu he wouldn't have personality and flaws, Wade on the other hand, he does.
francisthewitcher chapter 1 . 8/22
I hope Wade won't be a Gary Stu...
Memnon45 chapter 15 . 8/16
Love the story man, can’t wait to read more. Also I would love to see maybe a flashback chapter that shows Daniel and Nemuri’s meeting and relationship.

A couple questions I hope you’ll answer when you can, but will Wade’s powers evolve and he gains new ones or is it strictly Miles powers. Also will Wade have web gadgets like in the Spider-Man 2018 game or will be stick with the usual webbing. Keep up the great work and can’t wait to read more.
Hurricane Alpha chapter 15 . 8/3
This is a really REALLY good story so far! Please PLEASE update!
Dark Claw chapter 15 . 8/1
Was Wade using his Venom Blast to break the ice or using All For One or was he mixing both at the same time?
Guest chapter 6 . 7/31
Question: will there be Spider-Man Villains in Earth 675 like Venom, Rhino, Green Goblin, Kraven the Hunter, Chameleon, The Lizard, Sandman, The Vulture, Electro, Carnage, Mysterio, Shocker, Doctor Octopus, Black Cat and other?
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