is plot is thickening as hard as astrid's blancmange
pure class

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wonderful just simply wonderful
no really awesome

This was pretty good story

I read this over on Wattpad! It's definitely a book worth reading!

That was a fantastic story! Thank you so much for writing it!

This was a nice story, funny and well writhing, thanks.

Ha,ha, wow this is so good. I like a lot the fight in the bar, that was so fun.

Ha, this is so great and fun. Good job thanks.

Hummmm. This looks good.

You should have made hiccup a where dragon

Great ending to really inventive and fun story! Loved it-Thanks!

This is a really good story, and you ended it really well. Awesome!

A crazy, fitting end to this story. Astrid and Heather came a long way, and full circle-too, to end up in this whimsical, wacky town where so many oddities and the offbeat became friends and found love.

That it was Hiccup, Astrid finally 'discovered' and hit it off so well was fun to see.

As well as all the characters who blend in to make Berk a nice place to live. Enjoyed Dagur's rush to Astrid's fashion emergency and Mala's encouragement in this chapter.

Fitting the wedding was when and where it took place, so close to Halloween at that.

Now, if they can only get the rings out of Toothless...

CB73

Aww, it's over! Great Story! I look forward to the what-if suggestions too!

Wow... I'm just shocked that the whole time during that conversation, the one thing that Henry chose to focus on was that Hiccup is now "one of them"? It doesn't even cross him that he killed his own brother. It doesn't matter whether the bullet was meant for him or not. He still killed the one person who still held hope for him. But instead of expressing regret and remorse, he still tries to defend himself, shift blame, and in the end, reject the last person who had his back. The guy deserves to never see the light of day again. Even death is too good for him

I wished Hiccup had had the chance to tell his brother that if he had been honest and admitted that he owed a lot of money, he would have done everything he could to save him.