This made me feel a lot of things, but I also laughed my ass off. XD Great work as always girl!Excited for the next one.

OMG CONGRAAAAAAAAAAAAATSSSSS! Loved this chapter and can't wait to see what hell James is going to raise (if any). Poor Kai all nervous about a photo shoot lol

Yeahhhhhh, get it Ray. You da boss.

And ohhhhhh. Slimy Jamessss. Hate you. (James, not you. I love you.)

Thas what you get you slimy prick!

This was such a cute lil fun chapter, was adorable. And Kai's 'nobody dresses me but you'. that killed me.

Poor Ray though, not able to have his family there for his wedding. My heart broke for him right there. Nor was I expecting it either, ya sneaky sneaker. Very interested in seeing how that all pans out in the end now.

Ah! I was so excited to see an update for this and was not disappointed! What a fun chapter! I laughed pretty much the whole way through. I love the magazine tie-in back to Anderson at the end. Really tied the bow on the whole chapter. You also just have a knack for writing people and their habits so realistically. Congratulations on your own wedding! I hope you're staying safe and healthy too:)

Oh god finally an update. Well you probably don't know me buuuttt I've been reading the story from the start. I didn't have an active account that time to review but from now I have and I will.
Back to the story:
Ray getting all excited by the luxury was so cute, really shows that he is still not use to all the fancy life.
Kai and makeover never go well, through his reaction about the make up was a surprise even when he used to apply war paint in his teen.
Ray dressing up Kai was like #couolegoals. Sweet _
Owww felt bad for Ray, he is really close to the white tigers after all. But Kai has solution for everything (until it's his own issue. Lol)
Hahahah James must have gotten the shock of his life, that's was . Yo boy that's what you get leaving Ray, regret. After all Kai is the one Ray deserved and get.
Nice job! Can't wait for the wedding.
And CONGRATULATIONS for your wedding. Wish you all the happiness in the world and I hope this pandemic end soon and you'll get your dream wedding celebration with your family. I'm really happy for you.
-Kitty

T_T
I hate you so much.
That is all.
ITS FUCKING HAYFEVER OKAY?!
GOD?!

Won’t do a snapchat review for this one because no one sees Kat cry, mkay? Glad you understand.
Awwwww maaaaaateeeee. Just. All of it.
The dream. The outburst at Maxime’s. The lemon.
This was just. Gaaahh. Aw I proper loved this one. Like. Proper.
So glad we’re back on track with these two now!

Tyson being the shoulder to cry on for both of them I stand by 100%
The guy really just is the sort you could talk to and he would remain completely neutral.
Agree with him completely - GO TALK TO EACH OTHER. No bs. Sit in a room, lock the door and have it all out and then have some good ol loving afterwards. Yes.

Gawd daaaaaaamnn so much fyaaaa!
Ooh I do love a good barney.
Don’t even know who’s side I’m on in this tbh.
Gou copying Kai with the burger phone I did think was cute as hell. He’ll be cursing in French next. Little shit.
Ooooohh noooo!
I do find myself saying that a lot with this story. Such a rollercoaster.
And you say they’re both muppets in mine. Both stuck on the past and they need to let it go.
Some BOOOOOLSHIT! XD
Oh sort it out fellas. A good rammin would’ve sorted that right out.
May I suggest Kai getting in touch with Tala? *devil emoji* okay I’ll stop.. xDD

Goddd James was a right knobber wasn’t he! Ooooh so pleased we got to see that though! Why they split up and all that. Oooh..
Ooooh! Kai and Naomi! Phwoar. Ooh.. dunno how to feel though.. xD ooh noo.. Pahahah
Fab as always hunny bun. I will now go on to describe folk as having a personality like a turnip cos that proper tickled me xD

Loooophole bitchessss

Take 2.. love Kat.

Was HOWLING at the wedding planning at the beginning. Omg. That was actually hilarious.
And Really liked the flashbacks! Could feel the sinking heartbreak from him when he met /James/... was funny I could just envision the type of social media knob he is from the ‘Rock climbing photo’ xD
Kai and Naomi’s relationship was so sweet, literal opposites.. blesssss
Oooooh and Ray now having the dreams!
Oooooohhhhhh! Why you gotta do this to em.. eh? Why..
Fabby as always.. check me I’m catching up :P

Oh I liked this one an all xD
Loved the

Ooh I did like this one.
Was nice to see Ray and Maxime have a natter over wine and get some bonding in.
When she started singing too to get Gou asleep and Kai welled up omg. I feel for him. Like really. That would’ve been so comforting in a weird way and ugh. I love it.
The imagery of him and Gou throwing evils to each other too.. pah xD
Ooooh I did like this. So nice she’d had a photo of him after all this time too.
Blesssss

Dick worms. Omg. I smiled way too much in this chapter.
This story man. I legit get pangs of broodiness throughout and I hate you for that xD
Omg Dono! My heart! The way you write Gou proper makes me laugh xD “not his daddy too! Oh the humanity!” Pahahaha it’s so dramatic but in a kid’s head life is so it’s just perfectly done. Ah comedy gold.
Definitely gets his dramatic side from his father. Jumping off a boat for a bloody teddy. But he was right, if it keeps him quiet! And even if they did go get him a new one, exactly the same, wouldn’t have been the same...
Sigh. Kids.
Kudos mon amie

Continue writing! Amazing story..