Can’t wait for the next chapter!

I am going to say this a few have said this... if you read this story please please please please leave a review. Let the author know how much you love this story, give suggestions. I want to read more of this story and the sooner we get the reviews up the sooner the author updates. To the author love this story. In fact I love every one of your stories. Update soon. Please.

Hey I just wanted to say I love this story and my birthday is actually on 7th so if you could post a new chapter on that day it would be great and I would be really happy !

I kind of like to see one of those scenes where Brittany is exhausted and needs sleep and Alvin takes Melody put while Brittany is sleeping but Brittany wouldn't know that Alvin took Melody out and even have Alvin forget his phone so nobody can call him. I am not very good with describing things but I would like to see youvwrite this scenario because the way you write the interactions between Alvin and Brittany and when Alvin finally gets back would be just awesome. Amazing story I mean you do not have to use this idea. I would never be offended because it is after all your story and I love it. Update soon as you can please. :)

I am almost think when you get to Alvin and Brittany doing it... ;) I am almost going to suggest a borderline M chapter also how you could lead up to them doing it... have Simon, Jeanette, Theodore and Eleanor take Melody out so Alvin and Brittany can have time together and go from there... have Brittany initiate it not Alvin... I am blushing writing this...

I am wondering who will be the one out of Alvin and Brittany to tell Melody no! I want to read about them doing the good cop bad cop scenario. Hee hee. I actually going to suggest a chapter of Melody's firsts. Such as her first word, her first tooth (somebody suggested Alvin being the only one who can comfort her while she is teething), her first step, etc. Make it a competition between Alvin and Brittany who gets to see her first milestones. I think it would be cute. Good job. Each chapter gets better. This story is addicting.

Another quick thing I thought of something, you have actually done a good job of portraying Alvin as a dad and how much Alvin and Melody have bonded, but what if with Alvin's job how would Melody react if Alvin couldn't come over for a couple days, would she cry a lot and how would Brittany handle it?

I almost think Brittany is still having issues with the fact of everything that happened before Melody was born such as the fight her and Alvin had just before Melody was born. I almost think they need that one big argument where Brittany finally comes to head with her issues. Alvin kind of looks like he is struggling with wanting to go out and party. I think he needs to have that one final temptation that finally breaks him of wanting to go and party and get drunk. I would love for you to write a chapter of Alvin and Brittany dealing with Melody getting sick for the first time or when Melody starts teething (only Alvin can comfort her), etc. Does anyone have any ideas for Alvin and Brittany's firsts with Melody? Also someone else mentioned Alvin and Brittany having another child together. I think when Melody is older but I think it would be cool for Alvin to actually be there for the birth of a child and get to experience watching one of his children coming into the world. This time the baby would be planned. Hee hee.

Aww that was such a sweet chapter I loved it. Alvin is a great father I can tell. Can't wait to read more. Stay safe

Lol
Alvin heard angels sing XDXDXDXD

I liked the last part when Melody was sad because Alvin left and when he came back she went to sleep. I actually was going to suggest that is how she says her first word. Alvin goes home and as he is walking out the door, Melody starts crying and says Daddy. Hee hee. Great job you are so maddening. You get starting but you stop. I loved how long this update was. But guys if you read this story but don't review, give comments make suggestions. She may or may not use your suggestions but she does like hearing good things and she said she likes feedback and suggestions. To many AATC stories get started and don't ever get finished. I want to see this story get completed and no Kyle wouldn't be back.

This story is giving me Hardin and Tessa vibes lol loved this chapter can’t wait for the next!

This was so CUTE! Ol Alvie becoming a responsible dad and he got some good experience handling his daughter solo. It was nice to see how he going through the process. Wonder how the rest of the siblings would handle it lol

I was actually going to suggest for Melody's first word and it might be a little bit much, I was going to suggest having Alvin and Brittany argue or something not sure what and as they are looking at each other have her say both Mommy and Daddy but make Daddy the first word out of her mouth. Alvin is a cute dad. Good job bringing out his maternal instincts.

Wow o wow o wow o wow o wow that was both an amazingly sweet and great chapter! You are great at what you do! Keep going.