What a great story! I was captivated from start to finish. I love how you captured all the characters’ seperate personalities all throughout. I especially like how you wrote Brok and Sindri, very true to the game! And you already know how much I love your Mimir 3

I am looking forward to more of your writing!

This was lovely and I think the dialogue improved in this chapter. I think your passion for the fandom comes through and you have done a pretty good job for the first adventure into longer fanfic haha. I think the ends are slowly being tied which is good, and the arcs merged together ~

Well, I really liked the action in this chapter and the sort of dream like and fast paced visuals. I think you interweave the characters nicely though sometimes it is a bit confusing on who is narrating/speaking or maybe that is because I don't know the fandom at all haha.

I think you did well with the action and battles in this chapter, they had a nice pace to them and interweaved well. The big cast of characters is dealt with pretty nicely too, and Atreus’ motivation is a lot clearer so that is great :)

Oh, I like the ‘epic’ feel of this with the journey and the interaction with different mythos and people (although I am not familiar with it). The writing seems to flow nicely and move between the different genres, which you said about in the author’s note. Can’t wait to see how Atreus goes about finding his father next :)

really good first chapter. Got a little confused when it switched perspective too mimir, but it does flow overall as a 3rd person story. I like that Atreus has control of his shapeshifting ability and hope we get to see more of it. Please write more soon. :)

I am reading that book too! I was on chapter 5 but then college just slapped me in the face. I am reading it from start as of now! It's a nice book. Did you see Andvari and Loki in the beginning chapter? It's so nice to spot references from the game.

Favorited and kudos on AO3 and here. :)

Well, I like your weaving of the mythology, I mean I have no idea what is in God of War and what isn’t so it looks like a good job haha XD the kinda boyish mischief of it is pretty cool, alongside the more serious elements as well.

Fresh is super overrated in terms of looks.

i really think this is a cool idea seeing atreaus on his own is be pretty sweet hope to see more

I find no other problems for a first chapter except for the spelling of Atreus' name. The premise seems interesting and I'm quite curious what you intend to do for your future chapters. Have a nice day and I hope to see you with fhe next chapter soon.

THIS IS AWESOME! I read your tumblr version too. I was a bit confused as to why they were the same but then I realized that it was still you, just in another site. As a friendly advice, please put the link of this version to your story post of Tumblr. That way, people won't get confused like I did when they encounter this. I almost thought that someone was copy pasting your story, which is definitely NOT A COOL THING TO DO!

This is amazing, I love your instant introduction here. I definitely look forward to the interactions between Sigyn and Loki. I hope he doesn't get chained like in the myth. After all this is God of War, it doesn't follow the EXACT myth. Just a reimagining of an OC (canon OC aka Kratos) in Norse myth...and Greek myth. I mean, I had to stop and think about that because in the times I have played God of War games, not once did I thought.

"...wait a minute...Kratos is basically an OC created by a gaming studio...HOW AM I ONLY REALIZING THIS NOW?!"

Such a hilarious moment in my life! XD

Well, I look forward to your next chapter and all the God of War stories you'll make! You're an amazing and magnificent writer! YOU'RE AWESOME! HAVE A NICE DAY/NIGHT! Depending on the timezone ;)! Hehe! BYYYEE!

Oh yay you posted it! This sounds really good, I like the transformation element and the blending of the mythology, it suits your style a lot. I wish you well with continuing it :)