Reviews for In the Light
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 1 . 8/17
I could read an entire story of Yorkie and Bella’s back and forth lol.
ChristianMom54 chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
Perfect O/S. Loved it and thank you for sharing your talents with us.
biblepam chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
This was a very intriguing and enjoyable read. Very unique and interesting. Thanks for sharing and awesome job.
evilnat chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
Excellent! I loved this little one shot. Would love to see this one go further!
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audyaurelie chapter 1 . 9/21/2018
that was very unpredictable. but i’m in love with this short but great story! thank you for writing it x
cullensrule chapter 1 . 9/14/2018
I loved your story. I really appreciated Bella and Yorkie's conversations.
Lillywhite1 chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
Thanks for writing this wonderful story. I would love to have it continued.
Cecilia Siledubh Mohney chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
This is amazing! Would you consider extending it?
WiltshireGlo chapter 1 . 7/30/2018
That was fabulous! I really loved their (your) humour, once again. What a treat, thank you, lovely Lay xxx
apersonsmusings chapter 1 . 7/20/2018
I don’t know if it’s just because the concept of the Illuminati skeeves me out or what, but I didn’t like this Edward. Which is too bad because I honestly really liked him when it was all just about two fellow geeks/hackers. Loved the beginning of the story though! As someone obsessed with technology and the internet, I love reading fanfics with B and/or E as techies.
pinklady34 chapter 1 . 7/15/2018
This was pretty great...really enjoyed it! Great job!
Gabstastic chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
I loved it!

Finally I get to read a different story plot! I’m really glad it was from you! You certainly don’t ever disappoint.

The only thing that saddens me it’s that you won’t continue this one shot into a story... but I loved it nonetheless.

Hope to read from you soon!

Xx
DiMpLeS 09 chapter 1 . 6/17/2018
I loved it! I wish you would make it into and story!
Mom23xx chapter 1 . 6/16/2018
Fascinating! Will there be more?
Loveforgreeneyes chapter 1 . 6/15/2018
Interesting
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