Reviews for Illusory
KeyblademasterKiria chapter 1 . 8/29
Are you going to continue this? It is awesome! I hope you do continue to write this... I really want to know how Stan and Ford handle Dani and what happens when they find out the truth about her...
PhantomOfProcrastination chapter 1 . 1/5
This was a fantastic read. It captivated me from the start. Your characterization of everyone was spot-on imo, and the storyline was intriguing. I'd love to see a follow-up, if you ever decide to write one. Tysm for sharing this, and I hope you have a wonderful day/night!
Wayne Rees chapter 1 . 1/1
I want more. This feels like a great hook to a longer story.
Phoenix-Inferno18 chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
Love love love it! Good job!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2019
So cute
A phan chapter 1 . 2/7/2019
A masterpiece! I honestly wish there was more detailing their adventures.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
This is beautiful, and I wish there was more!
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
This will be a very interesting story!
Wooster chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
She'd rather save the world with macaroni art

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Oh God. That is the most Mable thing I've ever read. D

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Anyway, this was a nice sweet story. Glad to see you in my updates! Keep up the great work!
Fictional Fanatic from Fimfic chapter 1 . 5/26/2018
Oh wow, great job. I personally don't know what I was expecting, but this exceeded all my expectations.

I'm a bit sad that there isn't more, but I also know that there's no reason to draw out the well crafted content of a one-shot. Either way, thanks for writing this and sharing it with all of us willing to read it.
OriensRex chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
This was very awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
This is so cute. I love it.
clamche chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
That was... an AMAZING experience to read!
I relished in reading and rereading the first paragraph that laid out the stage for the story, where Dani laid out her stage, there was something in that paragraph that grabbed me like magic, so cozy. Even before I reached Montana, because, hahaha, there's a town called Montana here in Bulgaria, too.
I loved to see Dani making a living on her own, she's resourceful. Since I'm not familiar with Gravity Falls it was interesting to see the kids through Dani's eyes. I'm so glad this encounter ended up with a cool solution to her current predicament. Plus, she gainede not only her own friends outside Danny's circle, but even a potential family.
Yeah, and that intangible joke, really spot on! My favorite part I find most hilarious is Dani's thoughts at her first glimpse at Dipper's book - it truly sounds like a Vlad thing to have.
I pretty much enjoyed every minute reading this, so thank you for writing and sharing it. This story was so plotful and thorough in solving Dani's problem, I liked the realistic part where she's hesitant at first, not fully accepting, leaving herself an option to cut and run. The characters' POV sections were perfectly cut out and distributed to cover the full story, I loved the natural flow of the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2018
Cool story dude. Wish there were more stories like this instead of everyone dying.
PFTones3482 chapter 1 . 5/22/2018
Ahhhhh so cute, as usual. I'd love to see some continuation of this, where Stan or Ford realize what she really is. Crossovers are hard to pull off well, but you do magnificently. A
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