Was this a one shot or are there more chapters? I love this! And I’m hoping for more. I’m so mad at Edward. And honestly, I’m mad at Carlisle. He should have told Edward. And I’m mad at Alice! And I LOVE rose!
I am gonna be devastated if Edward just went on and lived his life in a big city and moved on and dated other women. He’s kinda terrible, at the moment, in my opinion, and it will take A LOT to redeem him. It’s interesting that Bella still loves him after four years and the absolutely horrendous way she was treated. So their relationship must have been something very very special.
And I’m really wanting Bella to pull herself up by her bootstraps, become a successful woman in her own right, regardless of a man, and then watch Edward work HARD to get her back. I’m talking like over the space of a year or something :) anyways, I have so many ideas for where this story should go and I would love to see how you want it to play out!

Sad and good all right here

Please continue the story.

I'm so sad you don't seem to be writing anymore. Your stories are some of the best I've read on FF.

please continue the story

I liked your story but for some reason Edward turn around annoyed me and made me angry for Bella's sake. Alice never thought of the consequences. She knew Bella and Edward broke up because of this and she let it go on. That would be a hard one to forgive.

what a sad sad story and tragic too. a lot of pieces to be picked up. poor bella so alone in the whole thing. no wonder rosalie thought she was such a strong person.

Very interesting and entertaining read. I like that Bella is willing to give him a second chance For once a tragedy that suggests a happy ending...I like it.

This would be a great story instead of just a one shot

Loved it so much. Looking forward to more.

Heart wrenching! Can’t wait for more.

Good story, lots of tears. I realize why Bella forgave him so quickly, it was a one chapter story. But he does NOT deserve to be forgiven in my opinion! At least, not for a long time. If you continue this story, I hope you take this into consideration.

This was great!

Loved it and am happy and excited to see where this goes.

Wow, m'dear-this was a tear-jerker to beat all tear-jerkers. I was merely cleaning out this old gmail address so that I could post to my blog, and here 'tis. An amazing story.

Know what? I've spent the day re-reading one of your stories - the one in which Bella and Charlie are evicted from the manor house which Edward buys, and he's forced to marry her after Charlie sees him helping to catch her from falling off the ladder. And James has stolen all the Swans' money after Charlie wouldn't allow James to marry his daughter? That one. I stopped reading tonight just as James confronted Bella for the first time.

You are such an extraordinarily gifted writer! Thank you for continuing to write and post!

With warmest thanks and regards,
Cassandra/Susanne :)