i love this story so perfect

I love it! Theo and Hermione are so good together. I'd have liked to know more about their story, how their love began, it could be multi chapter story. Maybe in the future you can write something similar with these two?

I swear I didn't hear up at the end. Oh, wow! That was just gorgeous! Sniff...

Athena is definitely a fitting name for the daughter of Hermione and Theo.

Awe the end was to sweet!

That was really great!

I loved it! But I don't understand how Hermione hid her pregnancy from Theo.