Reviews for Descent
LunaEvanna Longbottom chapter 1 . 4/25
I'm the most paranoid person in the world and, for some reason, thought it would be a good idea to read this at five in the morning while it's pitch black in my room.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
good story.
Valya 001 chapter 1 . 10/5/2019
Oh my god ! That was so Thrilling and intriguing. You have me holding my breath until the end. its really sad that its just a one shot and wouldn't become a multi-chapter story.
Smusic F. Reader chapter 1 . 12/19/2018
OMG! that was so incredibly creepy, yet so incredibly good! I understand why you doubt that you will continue the story, because how could she ever feel safe with someone named Edward Masen because of what Carlisle put her through. He was so incredibly insane!
sujari6 chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
Great story. Carlisle was completely insane.
cullensrule chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
That was pretty creepy. She will want nothing to do with him.
Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
Wow.
Poor Bella.
She really went through the mill.
But she has a great story to write.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
Damn even I was convinced. Lol. I’m glad he was arrested!
Poor Bella.
EeWee chapter 1 . 8/3/2018
OMG! That was creepy.
Anasamantha09 chapter 1 . 7/15/2018
Scaryyy! Plese, do not continue this story!
Teresa R chapter 1 . 6/14/2018
The was freaky as hell but so good OMG the hell she went through WOW and then the good guy comes along and she screams.
Blistful2006 chapter 1 . 6/7/2018
Darn this was Trippy poor Bella
NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 6/4/2018
OMFNG! This is fantastic! WOW! ;)
NKubie chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
I think that ending was just perfect! Creepy as hell story, but excellent ending. Not sure if she'll ever get close to the real Edward, though. LOL

xo
Nan
TwistStix chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Creepy but very good.
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