I was focused on the story that basically my work shift flew by. I almost cried when I realized it was done. please let me know when you start the sequel. I absolutely love the story.

this was a wonderful Story! and i am sorry i did not keep up with it when you postet it and commented like i did at the beginning.. it turned out awesome !

woot!
that was a great ride!

your Guest Speaker: disclaimers, are fun.
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:)

word.
(sorry. I have no constructive anything at the moment.
Please forgive me if I do not slow down to comment on every chapter. I am riding this river, and will occasionally point at a landmark along the banks... "Oh look. A comment box... oop... it's gone. Rapids ahead!"

awesome start. :)

Hope to read more soon.

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Oh, " Princess " is Alou. And the chapter 8 was in Riddick's P.O.V

Did I miss something? Who is Princess?

Loved this!

Very interesting I'mma read the rest of this work

hmm. sorta want to see how that goes.

Just brilliant! Absolutely loved it! Thank you!

I love your writing style and can’t wait to see if Riddick can find a way for Alou to see the stars...if just a little