Reviews for Minipa's Trope Discussions and How to not Suck Shit at Writing - BNHA
John Prodman chapter 1 . 1/31/2019
Wow, entertaining AND informative. I'll be visiting this story from time to time and follow the guidelines for my own. I rate it a OP, heterochromia, soulmark, multi-quirked, harem master, OC out of 10... and a favorite follow. :)
Grenda 2 The sequel chapter 5 . 12/22/2018
I'll be honest, your information is pretty useful and the points you make are as well. That said, calling someone a "cuck" unironically really undermines your discussion by making you look immature and just a lot bit petty (harming your ethos). Not a big problem, but still.
TheRangerBoy chapter 8 . 12/21/2018
Prepare for a hoard of PMs.

I'm gonna have to break that up into a LOT of messages.
Bastion Lightz chapter 6 . 12/16/2018
You don't want harem help from Naruto writers. Not even crossover ones. Bad mini.
ManofPewter chapter 7 . 12/16/2018
I'm literally autistic and the wage gap is literally real. Hitler is the worst and telling people to kill themselves is for dummies with no arguments. This isnt sarcasm.
G'night :)
Arthr1tis chapter 6 . 12/16/2018
What if a random villain had a Quirk that turned both Izuku and Katsuki into Beavis and Butt-Head?
Golem chapter 6 . 12/16/2018
Well, at least you have stopped insulting people. And hey, some of what you have to say is good and seems to be less subjective. Good job. But this really should not be here though.
Frost Glaive chapter 6 . 12/15/2018
This is great! I'm quite glad I found this, as I was thinking of contributing a story to the fandom. I haven't had this concept for long so it's still very much in the works but I'm brainstorming about giving Izuku a quirk or not (mostly whether a particular extra quirk will support OfA or not), how the plot would adjust according to the changed premise - and here I struggle with wanting to make a novel idea yet am afraid to break away much from the original story.

I haven't worked with a beta reader in a long time simply because I didn't feel I needed someone to check spelling and grammar (I look over my writing many times and use Grammarly to pick up the leftovers); but you did bring up a valid point - that is, someone who looks for plot continuity and such. So now I need to find someone who fits that role well...

Anyway, thank you; you've given me a lot of food for thought. I look forward to your updates.
ApertureGaming011 chapter 6 . 12/15/2018
Hey, question here:
One of my OCs is Jeremy Choi, a demigod of another universe that is referred as the Godslayer. As being a god and all, he would of course be OP like there's no tomorrow.

To make the story balanced, I thought of doing a lot of worldbuilding to find a way to not make a fanfic a curb stomp.

My idea is that in exchange of placing an OP OC, I would add another OP antagonist, in the form of Irith'Nor, the god of Pure Chaos, who has been doing an interuniversal crusade.

What do you think?
Herolover27 chapter 6 . 12/14/2018
Trust me, OC harems are even worse. Most OCs (Not all of them) are basically the author in the way they want to be presented as. So they are basically shipping themselves with real characters. That’s not creepy at all, especially not if the characters are teenagers.
Herolover27 chapter 4 . 12/14/2018
Personally for me, I think the best OCs are the ones who could bring a change into the story. The OC could have a arc or two not in the actual story. Another thing is flaws. I think the best OCs need to have flaws that relate to the story in some way and can be implicated into fights to raise stacks. Also I always find it weird to see a story where someone has more than one quirk. I once read a fic where a OC was Izukus sister and had four quirks. Neither of which related to each other or her parents. Also the two quirks I remember was that whatever she drew became real and those drawings were Invincible. Also she was invincible as well. Because that’s not a Mary Sue at all.
Herolover27 chapter 2 . 12/14/2018
This chapter perfectly describes why I hate so many Villain Deku Fics. They completely make him do a 180 out of nowhere and that makes him completely insane. I loved how you also gave a shout out to a good villain Deku fic. Also side note, I remember riding this one fic where Deku was homeless, and these guys decided to pick on him so Izuku decidedly to torture them to death. Like, what the fuck.
ManofPewter chapter 6 . 12/14/2018
You can rant for eight billion words and harem writers won't ever slow down. They know what they're doing.
Balloon rouge chapter 5 . 12/13/2018
Silly minepa don't you realize that oc are just surgically switching eyes or wearing fancy contacts always
Arthr1tis chapter 4 . 12/12/2018
What if I made an original character that can manipulate luck to a certain extent, reverse food decomposition, has super speed, and is Mexican?
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