Reviews for Temporal Displacement and Everyday Headaches
Alara Phoenix chapter 32 . 8/1
Hope you and your mother are doing well, thank you for being here and writing this.
(This story is one of my favourites and I'm shipping Blaise/Rose so hard because of you)
neji2332 chapter 32 . 7/15
Do Third- seventh year of Hogwarts in your story
Guest chapter 32 . 7/10
I hope blaise remains as dense as a osmium block when it comes to his (pretty damn blatant) feelings for rose until he's at least seventeen, so that 1, rose doesn't have to awkwardly turn him down and possibly ruin their friendship, 2, he doesn't have to uselessly pine after her for years while she's off looking at older men, or 3, *shudder* rose sees it and distances herself from him/ tries to set him up with other girls.
Although i wouldn't mind him realizing at some point, and then deciding that he would rather have their friendship than possibly ruin it with the possibility of more, and then watch as he lives in the distinct pain as rose goes about life not even realizing she's torturing him. This is distinct from realizing and pining, however, because if he's pining then he's just thinking she'd never go for it and he's too afraid to go for it himself, whereas in the other option, he's accepted and forced himself to believe that it's never going to happen, because he wouldn't let it.
In reality N.4, they probs get wasted and then wake up naked in the same bed, and then after weeks of dancing around the subject finally decide to start dating and see where it takes them. It obviously takes them to marriage, of course.
Guest chapter 32 . 6/30
I'm sorry about your mom, but I'm glad you're feeling better now.
night chapter 32 . 6/25
great chapter!
Nocnafuria123 chapter 32 . 6/25
Ciekawe opowiadanie XD
neji2332 chapter 1 . 6/25
Writing more chapters of this story
pandalove19 chapter 32 . 6/25
Bawling my eyes out at the cemetery scene. It was beautifully written.
SNEAKYKAYE chapter 32 . 6/24
Holy shit, this is fucking hilarious! Can't wait to see what happens next!
xrysatsan chapter 32 . 6/24
Congratulations for getting your period and becoming a women. Dobby you made laugh so hard. The scene was created in my head that I wouldn’t help my self. Rose is embarrassed doesn’t want to talk about it and Dobby does his own thing. Hilarious.
PurpleElement chapter 32 . 6/24
Don't call these slow updates, you normally update something once every 6 weeks or so (slightly quicker than that actually), I'm following fics that I thought where dead, yet update every 4 months to have gone over a year between updates (2 examples of both the former and the later, although Ap23 seems to have found their muse after a years break and is now updating on the regular)
Besides You're doing this For Free.
Whoever's complaining needs to show me how often they update their own works...
abeorth chapter 32 . 6/23
thanks for the chapter
a1993 chapter 32 . 6/23
Take your time if your gotta. The waits are worth it :)
I dont play those games myself but i think that 999 game is similar? Me im personally an FPS and RTS kind of guy :)
yesthatisuntrue chapter 19 . 6/22
Jesus I can't stop laughing. This is the second time a fanfiction has including some kind of Rickroll joke, and it never gets old! This fanfiction has been one of my favorites in this fandom, keep it up!
Eleiren chapter 31 . 6/11
Ugh those last few chapters hit hard. I was genuinely tearing up and may have been crying a bit. Cassi dying was something I expected after Lunas hint (Also your absolutely right, Luna best girl!) but getting to see thing from her point of view just broke me. I always loved this interpretation of Cassi as a strong family woman who wants to see her people thrive above all.
Terminal disease is one of those odd ways to die were you get the time to take care of everything but also have to live with the impending end. I've had a few cases of it in my family and it was oddly cathartic to read.

The funeral was beautiful too and overall I really adore this slice of life kinda style, character moments and interactions are one of my favourite things to read even if it's not plot relevant and I often wish fanfics could just go on forever, showing the little moments of life after the big bad is gone.

Something I noticed a few Chapters ago in the James White article on the founders and colours of magic is that one could interpret them as Gryffindor being a dark mage since he was the warrior of the group. Was that planned? If so is it gonna be picked up again later?

Anyhow I hope your medical issues resolve and that you get a chance to update this story soonish). I really fell hard for it and am looking forward to more.
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