Reviews for Early Present
Prisma19 chapter 1 . 4/4
This was heartbreaking to read but I love it though, great job. It was like as if that night Jason knew he was going to die that night while trying to save his mother. I am guessing that’s where he was going and why he was acting weird. I would have loved it if they did something like this in the comics where they all all came to visit Jason’s grave for his one year anniversary on the day he died. I am glad Jason died in comics because it gave us Red Hood who is one of my favorites and RedHood and the Outlaws which are my favorite comics to read.
randomlyselective chapter 1 . 1/29/2019
Right through the heart... Sobbing
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2018
So sweet and sad... Very well done.
SincerelyKayo chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
Holy crap this made me cry. JAY!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
Wow, this hurt. It took me a moment to realize it, but I kept on thinking Jason sure sounds like he knows he’s going to die. I thought that was my cynicism talking and then Dick and Raven discussed the date and my heart dropped with the realization I wasn’t that far off. Well written in how the tone was used for the story, fluffy but really depressing looking back. Great job.
AnonymousMisfit chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
You broke my heart.
I'm crying, I started crying the minute I realized what Jason meant-the second time he said it-by 'I'm a little cold,' and was nearly sobbing by the end.
Damn it! It's too early for these tears!

(Thank you for wonderfully breaking my heart! I mean it! This was beautiful!)
just-O chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
You have caused water to come out of my eyes. Amazing job. You tricky bass terd.
A Small Voice chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
My heart.
Excellent writing.