| Reviews for Father of Rome |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/4 Ok First offfffff Great idea And second so far I really like it -Yess |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 Learn how to correctly use punctuation. and it would be pretty good. |
 Tilty.bbb chapter 5 . 7/7/2018 Great read |
| Jet chapter 5 . 5/31/2018 Well that was a disappointing end |
| swordsNarrows chapter 5 . 6/1/2018 Amazing, but dark, very dark. |
| SpartanBoi chapter 5 . 5/31/2018 On that was dark. O.O |
| Paramedics chapter 4 . 5/29/2018 Loveee iitttt... |
| SpartanBoi chapter 4 . 5/21/2018 Great chap, but can you capitalize the first word of every sentence. |
| SpartanBoi chapter 3 . 5/17/2018 Can you split the paragraphs a bit more, it would make it easier to read. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2018 I like it. |
| swordsNarrows chapter 1 . 5/10/2018 Looks amazing for a 1st chapter. |
| SpartanBoi chapter 1 . 5/9/2018 This looks promising. |
