Oh my gosh, I'm so glad I found this again. You've done an amazing job with this. You bring so many threads together and it works amazingly, the creepy attraction Gothel had to Rogers was only hinted at in the show but this is how I would have seen it going. I was surprised and pleased so see Liam. You got him just right. I hope we get a sequel when he comes around to Emma, especially since you hinted he's off finding other magical people, I'd read a story about him finding his way back. Maybe he'd have to suck it up and ask for help with a bad decision reflecting the show. This is going straight in my favourites. Great job

Great chapter! They all finally found safe place to call home and start their new life together! A sequel sounds like a great idea!

Very sweet and happy ending indeed! I'm sorry to see that it's over too. But things are good, except maybe with Liam. If there's a sequel I bet that would be resolved, even if not though, I have a feeling things would be made up between them eventually. I enjoyed seeing the happy futures they have ahead of them. Thanks for writing.

Sequel yes please great chapter

Wow!
Story definitely didn’t go where I expected it either! Lol, definitely put some twists in there.

Well these last few chapters had my heart racing. If i die young of a heart attack I know who to blame ;p Seriously though, good job! I really enjoyed reading this! Looking forward to see what's next in store for them.

It as taken a day but I've read it all and I really want to know how it ends!

Did an older Alice come to help young Alice defeat Gothel? However it happened, I'm glad that is over with. The others are free, and Zelena is with Robin again. I like what Killian thought about home being making pancakes with laughter.

The last chapter!? Not nice ending th l like that! Hope there's at least an epilogue, maybe a sequel?!

Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta

Oh my! Awesome chapter! Not too surprised that Alice followed them! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

It's great that it seems both Emma and Alice have learned control of their powers. Are any of our heroes really surprised that Alice snuck in to help? Cute to see her and new Robin as well. And now it's on to the next and hopefully last hurdle of things. The defeat of Gothel.

Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta and can't wait for next chapter

What a loop you through us for. I was hoping that so much time wasn't really passing, and maybe Gothel was altering it. But then Killian was separated from Alice until she was a grown adult on the show. Thank goodness that wasn't really the case after all with the time passing and also Gothel forcing him to crush Alice's heart. I hope reinforcement has finally arrived. I would love to see Zelena serve Gothel some of her own medicine.

Oh my! Hope Elois finally gets what's coming to her!