...you know, I was never really all that interested in Kantai Collection before. Now? Well, I’m pretty interested. I actually want to see if you’ll continue this little plot bunny, simply because I find it both interesting and pretty amusing.

If you're taking ideas, how about one where Taylor basically becomes Mana Goddess lite, with the eight elemental spirits helping her to learn her abilities.

You know someone on SV is going to give you hell for that second to last paragraph.

Then calculate the energy dissipation in joules. Then convert to calories. :-D

Love the snippet and looking forward to more.

This is weird and delightful in a viciously overpowered way :D

Definitely a very fun and interesting idea which sounds like an amazing full story for the future!

more of this one plz

i just have the image of the mc being followed around by adoring ex-abyssals like a mother duck and her ducklings.

Chapter 11... Why did MC Never just get himself his own body? he REALLY did not need to stay in harry. OR eat the stone in front of everyone...

Rhea: I'm my own Grandma! I'm my own Grandma! Its so funny I know, but it really is so! hey! I'm my own Grandma!

when I read "hear of the Cards" I was honestly expecting a Yugi-Oh referance..even the cards an voices an everything. was a little thrown off when there was no mention of anything egyptian about the box, but hey, plot holes an some convieniant excuses could fix that "Hearthstone... Heroes of Warcraft" ...WAIT WHAT!? O_O...oh dis gonna be goooooood! D

Nice

that was oddly amusing way to 'kidnap' her

Somewhere, L33t is muttering “Someone stole my shtick, Again!”

Great job on this idea!

I really want to see the universe this is going to make.