| Reviews for The Darkness and the Past |
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  PakenPikachu92 chapter 4 . 7/30 I absolutely love this story and how you included la llorona, that’s awesome! Can’t wait for more :) |
| PakenPikachu92 chapter 3 . 7/30 awww poor Miguel :( I feel so bad! Another great chapter tho! |
| PakenPikachu92 chapter 2 . 7/30 I realllyyy like how fast paced this story is, sometimes stories have too much dialogue, but yours is a good mix between action and discussion :) keep up the good work! |
| PakenPikachu92 chapter 1 . 7/30 Wow! You are a great writer, can’t wait to see how the rest of this story goes :) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/26 This is a great chapter, we can all wait a little longer, after all, great things come to those who wait! |
| Eris chapter 4 . 7/14 So fascinating and emotional chapter. So hearthtouching. Hope you update soon. |
 katmar1994 chapter 4 . 7/12 You some things wrong here, like Rosita is Julio's sister which means that Oscar and Felipe are her uncles in law not sister in law since Julio is married to Coco |
| ainmals1 chapter 4 . 7/12 That is some chapter. Again you made a mistake, Rosa is Miguel's cousin so that makes her Elena's Granddaughter not niece. Things are getting pretty intense. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/26 Please continue! I’ve been reading since it first came out! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/5 Are you still writing this story? |
| MayaTanner18 chapter 3 . 1/19 Hope you'll continue this story! |
| ainmals1 chapter 3 . 10/25/2019 That was some chapter. I had a pretty hard time reading it because there of the five to six paragraphs (especially make space when I different person is talking). |
| Gabri1318 chapter 2 . 9/22/2019 OMG! This is the second time I've read this fic, and it's absolutely wonderful so far! Please write more! |
| Imagigirl20 chapter 2 . 9/8/2019 Interesting concept. I, for one, would love to read more, should you wish to continue. -Imagigirl20 |
| Gabri1318 chapter 2 . 8/5/2019 OMG! This story is so good! Please keep posting! I really like! I look forward to the rest! If you still intend to continue the story, of course! |
