Good story so far i love it please make more

Oh man Velvet is going to be pissed

Volume 7 dude? Where'd you go?

You forgot about his relationship with velvet

So thoughts boring and lame just added new ocs this story would of been way more amazing if it was about the son of Salem falling in love with Cinder Fall they cared for each other but Marek knew that Salem was just using Cinder so he spends he's time in story trying to make sure she lives but he also hates the gods because in he's mind their the ones who broke he's mom how amazing a story would be of the son of Salem who loves her so much he wants to destroy the gods the son of Salem who loves cinder and us afraid if loser her as well a mc with 2 sides one who loves he's mom and the other who is conflicted cause cinder is just a puppet to Salem

Here one of the questions we want to know, what happened to Mist? Is she alive? What would happen is she found out the real history and truth about her mother? And when will Team RWBY, Team JNPR, Oscar, and Qrow realize that Marek has lost his Beowolf tail and his hair is slowly turning blond?

KO awesome chapter, looks like Ruby and the group have made it to Atlas though the place seem to be preparing for war and hope our heroes will find a way to stop it before it could begin.

Ciik

Not bad, but i hope your mc will get more role in future fights. Good work.

Interesting

Nice

Nice story, good pacing, so it Marek x Ruby now

Meh

Nice

Eewwwww LGBT content! #WalkAway