Reviews for Mine |
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![]() ![]() The angst, the feels :'( So sad yet a perfect ending somethings are just not meant to be changed. Thank you for the lovely feels :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god i love it I hope the sequal is finished or will finish soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loveddddd the story! really! is the sequel up now? Can't wait to read ittttt Please more! this is bloody brilliant and just can't stop thinking about this story |
![]() ![]() O-M-G the drama O.O i feel so bad for draco its all his fault though im crying im totally crying TT_TT |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, this was REALLY good... i'm looking forward to reading the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Draco. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! Going to find the sequel now :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was okay, though it could have been better if you looked over your story or at least got a beta cause honestly your grammar's horrible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story i swear everytime i read it it gets even better... but im not going to lie the formatting is horrible! its hard 2 know whats a author note and the story wish u would revise that |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh god, i'm crying. :( ASOTA |
![]() ![]() ![]() "'Is there someone under there?' He asked incredulously. The toes withdrew quickly. 'Under where?' I asked innocently. 'Under your bed.' 'No.' I lied. 'Yes there is.' He crossed his arms. 'No there isn't.' I said stubbornly. 'Yes there is. How can you say there isn't?' 'It's my bed I should know.' 'Draco there's someone under your bed.' He looked at me. 'Who is it?' 'Hello! I am here you know!' Harry's muffled voice exclaimed from under my bed. 'I know!' Blaise exclaimed. 'That's what I've been trying to say.' 'You could at least have had the decency to ask me whether I was under the bed.' The voice said imperiously. Oh God. It was like dating myself." Haha! that was great! made me laugh until i started coughing. then i read it again and laughed, again. ASOTA |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked it ;D It's similar to the one I've already read some time ago, but the other one was concentrating on what would have happened if Harry took Draco's in the train compartment. I must say yours this is much more interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bah! i was hoping draco would tail harry into griffindor (twist!) but now he's stuck (yet again) in his father's evil clutches. ...work on your word choice/grammar/whatever. or just get a beta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible! The beginning had me cringe a little and I had all but given up on the fic, but the ending is... wow really. |