I have SO many questions. This is so well-written wtheck. One of the goofiest premises I've ever seen, and I need to know so much more. Please tell me this is supposed to be a romance between Bella and Carlisle eventually. I'm baffled and very impressed. Why is Edward a deer? What is the relationship between him and Carlisle? Is Edward still just as sentient as when a human-vampire? Is he a deer-vampire? WHAT IS HAPPENING, why is this so good, omggg

oh, god... it's a stalker deer.

I love it :D

Completely inhabited with run-on sentences.
An extreme amount of unnecessary textto the point where I had to mentally edit, in order to read this comprehensively.
I still couldn’t get through this without frustration because you simply aren’t writing in a comprehensive manner.
You preempt (give away) the plot a lot by saying things likeso perhaps she might have... except...”
Can I suggest you take a step back before posting and re-read/edit your chapters. Perhaps find a beta reader that would come in and help.
There’s a lot of room for improvement heresimply stylisticallyand I hope you make progress, as well as do well with your story.

Brea

I just love this story. I hope there is more about Edward the deer. I'd love to know how he came to be a vampire. He may just yet carry Bella off to be a forest bride. So cute.

Mostly, it's just the absurd descriptions of how pretty this deer is that make my day.

I wonder why Edward is obsessed with Bella especially since he's a deer. Is he some kind of shape shifter? Can't wait to see the story unfold.

Thanks for the update. I wonder what she thinks Carlisle is. Also wondering how well Carlisle knows the deer, whom I'm assuming is Edward. Not sure whether he is good or evil at this point. It will be interesting to see which way you take this story.

Love your story now following! . Please update soon! Hehe this is kind of funny cuz Edward is a deer

I've never thought one of the best stories i've ever read would be a deer!Edward one. But here we are. Nice story, nice pace, thank you for this.

Kudos!

OH MY SWEET LAWD. The fic is everything, and it gives me life. Please, more!

Me after reading this fic:
/OYjv8ogsEGE

Oh my gosh, what is this thing? I have to know more!
Happy writing!
Acro

Okie-dokie.

I think the greatest part of this, is the idea of Carlisle running around the woods desperately tackling supernatural deer. Yes, of all the parts, that is surely the best.

Well, this one sounds like it is going to be a bit different. Will be looking forward to seeing what comes next. Thank you.