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Fascinating, full of complexity. Very, very good. Keep writing!

I want to wish you good luck on this stroy which looks to be quite complex.

Could you please, give the definition of certain terms, I think it could facilitate the reading.
I also think that sometimes you changed the points of view too rapidly and I was sometimes lost. For instance, there is no real transition between the part with Paris and the one with Akhilles.

I am eager to read more.