Reviews for 5 Times Peter Struggled with Spider Metabolism, 1 Time Tony Helped |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nicely done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! Please write a sequel! I would write more in this review but I am currently late for schoolI just had to finish it! Thanks so much for this little piece of gold! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() lower class pride, not sure if that's funny or sad |
![]() ![]() ![]() very stark, well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw 70 degrees and freaked until I remembered Americans are the only ones not to use Celsius (big difference) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darn! This was so well written! I like how you mainly told the story in a "step back" type of third person. It plays! Also thr dialogue for Tony is so spot on that I could really, undoubtedly hear his voice. And just how you balanced everything was fantastic! I really enjoyed this, my friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I get hungry like every few hours and feel like I'm gonna die if I don't eat. It must be so much worse for Peter how is he not already dead honestly Tony feed that boy |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great so far! Really looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the ideas in the story. I’m excited to see what comes next! |