Seems like a nice fanfiction. And can somebody PLEASE, PLEASE write one about Jeredy and Sophia, from when they first met to when Jeredy went to work for STORM, to when Chase was born and end it with the day that Sophia mysteriously disappeared, leaving Jeredy to raise their son alone?

I really hope you continue this. The characters have a lot of life to them, especially the ocs. I really love the pacing and where the story is going and would love to see where it ends. Keep it up

Oh, snap, the flower actually worked! I wonder how Rose will continue her new treatment if she finds out that the same plant is currently infesting Alpha's body. The suspense!

oh daaaaang! these flowers are shady af man~...pardoning the pun, i really liked this chapter, i cant wait to see more!

oh, shit, the plot continues to thicken! and man, poor alpha, that sounds some seriously painful stuff ;w; hope he can be cured.

dear gODS that was nuts and so disturbing but man it was so cool! poor Alpha man;;;

aaaaaa this is so good! i love how you write samantha and abby and im loving the plot thats stirring! :D

Oooh, things are getting interesting! All your characters sound intriguing and you're really good at integrating original characters as well. lmao Abby would have a steaming Commander Trey running after her lmao classic. Can't wait to read more!

I await with baited breath for the next chapter (๑･̑･̑๑)

I like it .