for the love of all that is holy make a sequal

please for the love god please make a sequal i have never seen cardin done lile this and i love it you sir/madam are a goddam artist

Make a sequel please

Dammit! I actually cried reading this! Good writing!

See this is how you make a side character seriousl in RWBY Cardin existed just to be a bully then be get rid of but this fanfiction goes into a WHOLE NEW LEVEL seriously 90% of these fanfictions have better writting then actually RWBY itself great work mate ı saw your DOOM fanfictions and learned of you from there but this fanfiction is also superb

there is only one problem with this story
it ended

Thank you for writing one of the greater stories for this pairing. Know that your work is appreciated and that you have done a service to not only us readers, but to yourself through your self-improvement shown in your hard work on creating this story. This was an experience I loved every second of, and if I was able to change anything...

I wouldn’t touch a thing.

Thank you for your story. Hope you continue to create more, you magnificent bastard.

Twas a nice story.
I daaaaw'ed at the kiss. The build up was very well done.

the story was very good!

I love cardin x velvet!

This is cute.

It's perfect!

I'm fine with this!

please do not do the blocking of the cocks
i need this ship to finally prepare for voyage and the next chapter seems like the only chance it has

Yay, it lives!

maybe continued story?

i love it good job will you continue the story?

Nice job looking forward for more :)