I love this story and I have to say that I love charles and anne together better than king henry cause its a shame cause henry cavill and Natalie dormer would have better chemisty with each other. Either way I love the ship amd I love charles

Yay, a new chapter! I loved it. The fact that you haven't yet shown Charles' response to these events really builds up the suspense/drama for next chapter. ;)

I love that you chose the name Lionel instead of Edward or Henry, and the reasoning behind it! I also loved Anne's excitement to visit court, I'm sure it will be veeeeery interesting. Looking forward both to seeing Charles, and to seeing Henry's reaction to Lionel, and if there'll be a private scene/meeting between him, Anne, and the children. Hmmmmm.

Fantastic! Can't wait for the next chapter. Take care and stay safe. Read ya Later ;)

Like the story!

I’m excited!

Update please

Yes! Thank you. Looking forward to reading more. Your comments at the start were harsh on yourself, regarding the falcon Smiling at the mouse. I see it as vivid imagery that enhances your writing, a sort of reverse personification if you will. It makes you want to imagine how a falcon would smile at a mouse - maybe with a glint in its beady eyes! Please do continue your brilliant story.

Thanks for the update.

Love it! Cant wait for more!

I'm so excited! Anne has her son and now she ready to be petty! I love it! I like Lionel's name, its very unique but also from history, and there wasn't a lot of unique names during this period. I hope once Henry sees his son, that he is declared legitimate and a prince!

OMG! This story it the best! It only up to chapter 5 and I'm already hooked! Please please keep it going, I honestly don't know who to root for, (Anne/Brandon or Anne/Henry) however seeing as whose tagged I know which I should, but I'm a longtime Anne/Henry fan!

Ahh! I can’t wait for Christmas at court and Henry looking like a fool meeting his son!

So Anne had a boy and Jane continues to be without children. Good. Let the blonde dimwit suffer as Anne did for a good long while. It’s no less than she deserves.

I was pleasantly surprised to be reminded that one of the Seymour’s was loyal to Anne, but Elizabeth Seymour makes an excellent point. Jane’s misery is entirely of her making and she more than likely doesn’t even know it, too wrapped up in a delusional fantasy about Henry.

I’m still waiting to see Mary get busted for attempting to ally with the Spanish to get the throne. Should be interesting to see what happens there where it comes out. No doubt Jane will beg, plead, and try to put the blame for it on Anne with Henry. Hopefully by then Anne and Charles will have fallen in love and Charles can help protect Anne and the children. Anne’s brother and sister need to join her as well.

All in all, this was a great update.

Funny enough after saying you need to go back and read I went back and read and realized it was just my tired mind that made it look like something was wrong. SORRY!

Great chapter even of there were some mistakes in the beginning. (When the messenger came to court) Might want to have a reread