im picking Selene/Daenerys because even thought at the end she at fault and succumb to the Targaryens madness, before that she accomplishes so much and the pair can make a very powerful couple not added the fact that Aemon(Jon) and Aegon are legit Targaryens. many can be benefit from that

It’s been awhile since you updated are you going to continue this story

So a serious amount of spelling mistakes. Everything feels so rushed. The first part was pointless since everyone has either read or watched that scene already. You actually got Jon Snow's real name wrong. It's Aegon, not Aemon.

There's really no context for why Lyanna would betray her house and husband, as well as hide Robert's own child from him. Jon Snow couldn't be a legitimate child if Lyanna is already married unless their marriage is annulled.

I find it really hard to believe that Robert would ever send Selene away when she's the only thing he has left of Lyanna. I could only imagine him favouring her because of how much he's in love with the idea of Lyanna, like he was in canon. He would never send her away in favour of his spoilt son, especially since he dislikes Cersei so much and would never let her win against Lyanna's memory.

In terms of inheritance, pretty sure that Selene is first in line since she's the only child born of Robert's first wife. Any children born from the second wife would come after the first wife's children, even if the first wife only had daughters.

There's very little depth to Selene and her perception of the world. You jump in time so fast and then get the ball rolling on events without really exploring her character both as Selene and Haley. I also do not believe for one second that Selene would have enough knowledge to improve farming. She went to primary school, then was shipped off to Hogwarts to learn magic, and died in a war at the age of 17. When did she ever learn how to improve medieval farming methods?

It's annoying how limited your knowledge is. There are many Faceless Men, and Jaqen H'gar is just a random name the one Arya met used. He was No One, with no name. You should have used an OC. Although to be honest, it was totally random that entire scene. How the hell would a Faceless Man even know about her past face or to look for her? No explanation for any of that at all. It also makes no sense that Selene would be born with a tattoo of the deathly hallows on her wrist and that it would be dismissed as odd by everyone. There's no reason for her to even have that tattoo.

Your explanation of the only women who learn to fight is really annoying. The women of Bear Island and Brienne are certainly not the only women who know how to fight. You need to do research on this stuff, and it makes little sense that Selene would have this knowledge on hand like that off the top of her head.

"Your Grace" is a title used for a king, like "your Majesty." "Your Highness" is a title used for a prince or princess.

Selene dying from Voldemort's killing curse in the Forbidden Forest bothers me. She never went back and finished the prophecy and ended the war. She never helped rebuild the Wizarding World and put society back together while in the spotlight. She has no real experience as a leader, warrior or politician. She would not be able to enter the game of thrones like she knows what she's doing and what needs to be done. She has no depth of character at all from what you've written, and her shallowness so early on is discouraging as a reader. You don't even describe her appearance, if she looks like Lyanna or not. Her relationships are also shallow, and she has done nothing to prove herself in this new world as a contender for a powerful position.

This story needs a lot of work. There's plenty of potential, but it's too obvious that you lack experience writing. I hope one day you decide to rewrite once you've gained experience.

Good story wish you would continue it

Well. If you ever take this up again. Just forego the shipping, and make it a gen fic. Focus on Selene getting Westeros ready for war against the icicle.

Inheritance succession goes to Selene, once Cersi children parentage is revealed. Provisionally, that is.

Roberts brother or her would rule, as steward until Selene or him produced a male child. If they both did, then Selenes child inherits first.

Why this is in crossover section, this is just similar to OC Baratheon character with some extra skill. It you put this story in GOT section people still liked it.

Selene / Daenerys Targaryen

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and I hope Aegon and Daenerys will be with just Selene and not each other

I love your story, hope you'll update soon 3

Please update

Me hubiera gustado que el emparejamiento fuera Selene y Aegon nada más pero bueno, no se puede hacer nada. Y seria bueno que si Joffrey despierta Selene le coloque un hechizo de verdad o algo asi para que no la pueda culpar de lo que le paso.

Very enjoyable story. I like the introduction of lightbringer to the mix now. Thanks for sharing!

Robert should have a Royal Guard detail assigned to her and let her tour the world... Mainly to get her away from her supposed brother and h
his family. The Guards should be from people He knows he can trust. So the North with people picked by Ned, people from the Vale (picked by her), Stroms End by uncle Stannis, maybe one of Orbyuns daughters, and a personal training.

After all the king should use his brain for once and notice is son just tried to kill his daughter.

On their tour they can buy goods in each place and sell them on their journey. Maybe even noticing some she knows how to make that could turn a profit for 'her ' bc her father clearly can't handle money and her step mother is driving the kingdom into ruin.

She could also make healing balms and sell them especially to win over house Tyrell to help ease her son's pain.

i am curious about the pairing is selene the aegon the conqueror in this relationship or is aegon fucking both of the girls which will be so disappointing i mean finally having a queen who has a wife and a husband but it is not a threesome it will be something unseen
furthermore i hope only selene will have children no aegon having magical swimmers or some other bulshit