Great story! My all time fav, but when do you plan to update it?

The only thing that makes this story a-typical is the poorly written characters.

I really enjoyed this story please update soon.

Man this is one of if not the best story I’ve read. It is amazing please update soon.

OMG WRITE MOREEEE

dont make percy go back to annabeth. she betrayed him for someone she barley new. she don't deserve him. give him to Artemis she would be way better no percabeth

this by for the best I have read si far please I am begging you don't rewrite it like alot of others do you are doing an amazing job better than the others on my opinion

zues- of course it had to be wings. I love how you added that part it was hilarious

plz update

hope you continue writing this story can't wait to see what will happen

Okay, skipped ahead to see how things shape up and whether I want to read up to this.

I don’t.

Annabeth is being treated like she betrayed Percy despite having been effectively mind-controlled. Why the heck would I want to read something like that? I don’t. Not to mention how hypocritical it is of every camper.

Despite my dislike for her, I do not wish her character ill.

I like your take on the betrayal reasons and everything. I can’t promise to read the story fully if it doesn’t deviate from percabeth (preferably pertemis but anyone really). I’ve always disliked her. From the first book and throughout the rest she annoyed me and felt like a third wheel somehow. She also tends to be foolish as though her job is to make easily avoided mistakes to add drama and intensity and generally be a moron who brags about her non-existent intellect. She also doesn’t have much of a personality in the series and is little more than a standard-issue cookie cutter model of a haughty fool girl.

There also is the fact Percy and her fall in love for no reason at all. The best I could gather from the books is that they’re teens with a crush mistaking lust for hot bodies with love.

I suspect Rick Riordan originally meant for her to be a side-but-important character like Will or Katie but he changed his mind without taking the time and effort to re-create the character into main character material. To be fair, such work does take a lot of effort and time to do.

So, yeah.

I actually like this one. Still, why does he always gain powers from being a champion or adopted. It’s a bit irritating since not only is he already extremely powerful as himself, it takes a lot away from his existing powers and also marches towards Gary Stu territory.

It might just be me, but no matter how upset or angry I am, when someone apologizes I just can’t help but let go of my feelings and forgive them instantly.

Those Hunters only feel sorry because they got caught... Seriously thats how this would work. You don't just H"ATE MEN" then go "OH I'M ALL FOR THAT GUY"