Reviews for Air and Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "With only airbending, the weakest of all the elements" HA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Azula didn't keep her word why the hell would they assume Ty Lee would keep hers if it had been a trick/trap? |
![]() ![]() ![]() There really should have been some line breaks or anything really to indicate a scene or location change. Without those, it looks like characters are jumping all over the place. Only reason I can understand it is because I can remember scenes from the show and imply what happens between. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll go against the flow and call this a horrible chapter, for one simple reason: it's totally out of character for Azula to not fight (at least verbally) for the throne. I get that you wanted to end this sooner than later, but there is no character development explaining that Azula would give everything up to Zuko without doing anything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank You |
![]() ![]() ![]() Spacing please wall of text is ugly in every form |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to how you are going to implement Mai as one of the final bosses if she is still going to be considered the Fire Princess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed it |